Fiamma puts flowers in her hair,
lights have been extinguished.
You’ve changed the course … shifted.
As a lock of red hair falls over her shoulder,
fruit is sliced open as walls weep
perfume contained inside them.
A pounding as he exits on a spiral staircase.
I am falling into myself, no escape.
Unraveling each part
of a painting hanging upside down.
Tiles have cracked under foot,
a crevice is opening up.
Fiamma puts her flowers in my hand.
She has lit the candles,
placing them far out of reach,
as a lock of red hair falls over her eye …
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Striking images/word choices/flow. . . truly original and haunting.
ReplyDeleteHaunting this Lady of the Flame...she seems to have an agenda here that she is not willing to fulling share...placing it just out of reach...I will have to do some research on this lady....thank you for the introduction to her...bkm
ReplyDeletei am falling into myself unraveling a painting hanging upside down...i really thought this was going another way from the beginning...but effective imagery...and i like the coming back around to the strand of hair...
ReplyDeleteHaunting is a good descriptor as Steve had mentioned. I find it cryptic yet rich in detail and imagery. Leads the reader to want to know what may occur next as the hair falls over her eye. Intriguing poem
ReplyDeleteSuper, very exotic...was she met last night...was it a dream, his downfall, his muse...?
ReplyDelete...Fiamma puts flowers in her hair...
lovely opening.
Haunting and full of passionate imagery. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery! Great piece.
ReplyDeleteSuch intensity. A connection to another and in that instance, one's world is tipped on its ear.
ReplyDeleteI feel like I've been privvy to a sacred ceremony here, Pamela. Very intriguing imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Steve.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment, Barb.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brian.
ReplyDeleteThis lady of mystery...you leave me wanting to know more about her. Nice imagery.
ReplyDeleteWho knows what may happen next, Adam:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit, kolembo.
ReplyDeleteAnthony, thanks so much:)
ReplyDeleteHi, Ollie, I loved your interview.
ReplyDeleteThanks:)
It can happen, Kim.
ReplyDeleteYou might have been, Eric:)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Charlie.
ReplyDeleteloved the falling into myself..what a great picture you paint with this
ReplyDeleteThanks, Claudia.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing poetry and your words 'falling into myself' caught me.. wonderful.
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks, Shashi.
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