"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Monday, February 14, 2011

Tides of Tranquilty monday poetry potluck #22-love, bonds, relationships

Floating leaves
drifting on waves
sparkling tides move
bound by elements
laced together
Braided silhouettes … frozen

In evershifting harmonies

Waves washing away
rough outlines of weary
hearts focusing on
brilliant stars shining
in pinpoints of calmness
Captivating shapes … suspended

Bonds that unite   
a realm of one
Posted by flaubert at 2:58 PM

19 comments:

  1. RJ ClarkenFebruary 14, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    Wow! I love the 'braided silhouettes' - that was some inspired phrasing! A lovely bonding!

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  2. flaubertFebruary 14, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    Thanks RJ, all this is done
    in the name of love:)
    It is a hard reach for me
    to write romantically.

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  3. KavitaFebruary 14, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    oh wowwiiiess!! This was a definite delight to read and absorb, Pamela! This time, our poems seem to have taken a similar road.. and i love it! yaaayyy
    Enjoyed your wordplay here, girl...
    "laced together" brought some real lovely images to mind.. :)

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  4. flaubertFebruary 14, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    Thanks Kavita:)

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    For my taste, this is the way to write love poetry, Pamela. Your images/metaphors say so much in such an eloquent way. You are one of my favorites.

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  6. Madeleine Begun KaneFebruary 14, 2011 at 11:40 PM

    That was lovely!

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  7. Dave KingFebruary 15, 2011 at 5:17 AM

    I'm with lightverse the braided silhouettes is brilliant. The whole thing works well though, and in its quiet way has a deep effect. Well done.

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  8. Shashidhar SharmaFebruary 15, 2011 at 6:22 AM

    Beautiful .. the bonds that Unite.. a realm of one.. Great piece here.. thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  9. JingleFebruary 15, 2011 at 7:43 AM

    your words are dynamic and fun.
    lovely entry.
    Happy Belated V Day.

    A++

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  10. Strummed wordsFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:04 AM

    Leaves on the waves are a great muse for poetry.

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  11. Jane DoeFebruary 15, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    Brilliant and stunning with a side of awe. Very well done!

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  12. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    Thanks Victoria, but not my
    usual style.

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  13. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    Thanks for the visit Mad.

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  14. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    Thanks Dave:)

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  15. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    Enjoyed your post as well Shasi.

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  16. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Same to you Jingle.

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  17. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Thanks Gerry.

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  18. flaubertFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Thanks Jane and about those tattoos ...

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 17, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!

    Awards 4 Poetry Potluck Week 22, Enjoy!

    Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
    See you next time!
    xoxox

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