On cerulean, a shade to fit parameters, the click the clack of pounding keys, in pale white place, self in front of ebony. A history laid before us of caffeine-laden blood that drives me to the edge of sleepless nights and hazy mornings. Past has met present liquid crystal display. Obsolete machinery finds a home in the dusty attic, buried under boxes containing our lives. Memories … an impression left in words behind.
First off, perfect font choice! "Past has met present" is a great way to summarize today's challenge, and comparing an LCD with a boxed memory is also very telling. Yet, the memories and impressions of past writers remain through the words passed on, and from which many of us have learned. Well written, Pamela.
What is that damn thing sitting on, that made so many of us imagine final, forgotten resting places? "... a pale white place, self in front of ebony." Yes. And the rawness of that place does have the feel of so many sleepless nights trying to get a nameless thing down in words ... Very nice. - Brendan
All that a critic, as critic, can give poets is the deadly encouragement that never ceases to remind them of how heavy their inheritance is. Harold Bloom
Vasequillo lake
about 15 minutes from our home
"You can never compete with anyone but yourself." Cassandra George Sturges MA, MA, Psy.D
Poor forgotten typewriter! Sometimes the archaic machinery is all that will work...I find a pen and paper works too :) Lovely imagery you create here
ReplyDeleteI wonder what percent of coffee is consumed by "us"?
ReplyDeletethe attic...you never see words of joy referencing...the attic
may have to fix that:-)
Peace, hp
I have some up
First off, perfect font choice! "Past has met present" is a great way to summarize today's challenge, and comparing an LCD with a boxed memory is also very telling. Yet, the memories and impressions of past writers remain through the words passed on, and from which many of us have learned. Well written, Pamela.
ReplyDeletean impression of words left behind....and did they ever make an impression on who we are today....bkm
ReplyDeletenice...writing keeps me up at night and wakes me quite often...we have no hoice but to leave those impressions eh?
ReplyDeleteWhat is that damn thing sitting on, that made so many of us imagine final, forgotten resting places? "... a pale white place, self in front of ebony." Yes. And the rawness of that place does have the feel of so many sleepless nights trying to get a nameless thing down in words ... Very nice. - Brendan
ReplyDeleteWow - this hit a familiar note! Staying up late...bringing up old memories...past meeting present.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved the visual of the second line, "...the click the clack of pounding keys,.."
Superb, visual, restrained-emotive work.
ReplyDeleterepressedsoul, I walk round with pen and paper in hand always.
ReplyDeletehpicasso, I believe I have stock in coffee in
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So true, Adam, where would we be without books.
ReplyDeleteIn so many different ways, Barb.
ReplyDeleteBrian, I have a journal by my bedside and quite
ReplyDeleteoften in the middle of the night, wake and jot
down a line or two.
The center drop out of the desk? I think.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brendan.
Thanks my friend, RJ, I believe most can relate to
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Thanks so much, Steve.
ReplyDeleteWonderful entwining of old and new and so much truth to "buried under boxes containing our lives".
ReplyDeleteYes, there is Jack. I love your photography.
ReplyDeleteYou have got a great eye.