"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Tuesday, April 5, 2011

"Warmth" One Shot Wednesday #40

In
a French
bakery
across the street
scents linger
for some
time

When
there are
aromas
still sweet perfume
memories
held in
thought





I recently saw a fellow poet use this form and decided to give it a whirl.

Thanks for the inspiration, Marianne.  If you would like read some lovely
Septolets visit her site:   http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/


Marianne said:

PS - When I write septolets, the form is slightly different. I found the form here:
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
•Fourteen words
•Seven lines
•Two related stanzas
•Create an image or picture

(seems I missed that 14 words instruction, yikes!)
 Thanks Marianne

25 comments:

  1. Wonderful form. I will have to try this. I love the poem full of scent and now I'm hungry for pastry!

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  2. I've never seen this form before. Nicely done.

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  3. Cool form and wonderful little poem!

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  4. I like this form, Pamela, and will give it a go later today or tomorrow. But you do it honor with imagery that wafts off the page. Nicely done.

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  5. The form sets up a dramatic pause on time and ending with thought. Cool effect. Succint capture of the moment.

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  6. nice...this is spot on...many a place carries a scent that lingers with me...that bring back memories...

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  7. Wow! You painted such a vivid picture with almost no paint! Fantastic.

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  8. very nice Pam and thank you for the lesson...I am learning so much about poetry from everyone...this is one I still have to try...this is a good month to try them all...bkm

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  9. I like the call to the senses these wafting whiffs of the words give out, pamela. I've not tried the septolet--the shorter forms are, the more they rack my brains--but you make it look easy here.

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  10. These are well constructed, Pamela. You bring the reader to a different setting with smell. It works. Scent is such a driving force.
    ~Brenda

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  11. I gave this a try.But I haven't the skill to construct such a vivid image with so few words.

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  12. A simple truth, well told.

    I like the form.

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  13. how true ! oft it is the scent and the aromas that almost always evoke a good or bad memory...splendid thought

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  14. Oh my stars! How did I miss this yesterday? You have created a wonderful piece here, Pamela, redolent with the happy memories of a well-loved place. I can almost smell the delicious bakery aromas wafting on the morning breezes. And thank you for mentioning me! You are so kind!!!

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  15. PS - When I write septolets, the form is slightly different. I found the form here:
    http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html

    The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
    •Fourteen words
    •Seven lines
    •Two related stanzas
    •Create an image or picture

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  16. Septolet? And here I thought it was just a delightfully-arranged poem! :)

    That's too much counting for me - if I ever write a septolet (or any other fancy form like that) it will probably be accidental.

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  17. I spent just a few days in France in my life, and the bakeries are like nothing that I ever could have dreamed of.

    summoning now croissants that make the sun rise...

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  18. Scent is a banana peel to memory. The smell of fresh-baked bread uses a baguette for a battering-ram. - Brendan

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  19. Thanks to all for the very nice comments on a form I didn't get quite right.

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  20. Well beyond my skill level, but very enjoyable to read. Thanks, also, for the info. Admire you adventuresome attitude toward your writing. Vb

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  21. Obviously beyond mine, too, vb;)

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  22. Harder than it looks, I know. This is an excellent one.

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  23. So much harder, now I must see, if I can actually incorporate all of the instructions, Dave;)

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