"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Sunday, April 17, 2011

"Jasmine" NaPoWriMo #17

My tabby
cat sleeps by my side
Whiskers twitch
with each dream
On a chaise lounge in the sun
watching birds fly by




*a shadorma
Posted by flaubert at 2:01 AM

25 comments:

  1. vivinfranceApril 17, 2011 at 2:19 AM

    Ah, those cats: aren't they the lucky ones?

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  2. Stan SkiApril 17, 2011 at 2:26 AM

    It ain't a dogs life for cats, is it?

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  3. Dave KingApril 17, 2011 at 3:23 AM

    Like it!

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  4. ireneApril 17, 2011 at 3:26 AM

    Nice! It's a cat's life.

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  5. Ron.April 17, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    What we cannot reach, we dream. Beautiful notation.

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  6. MarianneApril 17, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    Sweet accolade for Jasmine! I like the shadorma form ... will be trying one today! Thank you for the inspiration!

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  7. JinksyApril 17, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    That's the life! :)

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  8. brenda wApril 17, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    =^..^= Meow!

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  9. LindaApril 17, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    I can visualize the setting—and the cat.

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  10. ElizabethApril 17, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    Ah, a moment of respite. Needed by one and all. Good idea and love the simple, but satisfying image you created,

    Elizabeth

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  11. Andy SewinaApril 17, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Oh to be a cat!

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  12. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    Viv, like Andy said to be a cat:)

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  13. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Not for a cat it isn't, Stan.

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  14. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Thanks Dave:)

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  15. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    It is that, Irene.

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  16. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    We can do that, Ron:)

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  17. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    I am happy to be an inspiration, Marianne. I like the form, it is simple and easy to work with.

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  18. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    Wouldn't be bad to be a cat, Jinksy:)

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  19. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    Back atcha, Brenda =^..^=

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  20. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Thanks Linda.

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  21. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Very much needed on this end, Elizabeth.

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  22. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 6:04 PM

    Wouldn't it be great, Andy.

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  23. MaryApril 17, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    Lovely little poem, Pam. Our pets are such delights, such fun to watch.

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  24. flaubertApril 17, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    Thanks Mary, I needed a bit of a relaxing break, and what better subject matter.

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  25. AnonymousApril 18, 2011 at 7:31 AM

    Oh, lovely!

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