tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post729209620625666550..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Warmth" One Shot Wednesday #40Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61978897573203259572011-04-07T12:54:07.962-05:002011-04-07T12:54:07.962-05:00So much harder, now I must see, if I can actually ...So much harder, now I must see, if I can actually incorporate all of the instructions, Dave;)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90355825752658512432011-04-07T12:42:01.017-05:002011-04-07T12:42:01.017-05:00Harder than it looks, I know. This is an excellent...Harder than it looks, I know. This is an excellent one.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66898856781799331572011-04-06T18:01:20.770-05:002011-04-06T18:01:20.770-05:00Obviously beyond mine, too, vb;)Obviously beyond mine, too, vb;)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64519823901143034842011-04-06T16:24:57.696-05:002011-04-06T16:24:57.696-05:00Well beyond my skill level, but very enjoyable to ...Well beyond my skill level, but very enjoyable to read. Thanks, also, for the info. Admire you adventuresome attitude toward your writing. VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55940435811300634192011-04-06T14:26:11.265-05:002011-04-06T14:26:11.265-05:00Thanks to all for the very nice comments on a form...Thanks to all for the very nice comments on a form I didn't get quite right.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39695434095958989022011-04-06T12:24:28.102-05:002011-04-06T12:24:28.102-05:00Scent is a banana peel to memory. The smell of fre...Scent is a banana peel to memory. The smell of fresh-baked bread uses a baguette for a battering-ram. - BrendanBrendanhttp://blueoran.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21226051971600011582011-04-06T12:19:02.839-05:002011-04-06T12:19:02.839-05:00I spent just a few days in France in my life, and ...I spent just a few days in France in my life, and the bakeries are like nothing that I ever could have dreamed of.<br /><br />summoning now croissants that make the sun rise...Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58955440596494282752011-04-06T12:01:28.314-05:002011-04-06T12:01:28.314-05:00Septolet? And here I thought it was just a deligh...Septolet? And here I thought it was just a delightfully-arranged poem! :)<br /><br />That's too much counting for me - if I ever write a septolet (or any other fancy form like that) it will probably be accidental.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55989361936591311382011-04-06T11:27:10.168-05:002011-04-06T11:27:10.168-05:00Beautiful poem!
Here is my One Shot:
gost of a r...Beautiful poem!<br /><br /><br />Here is my One Shot:<br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/04/ghost-of-rose.html" rel="nofollow">gost of a rose</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27448002881739732852011-04-06T09:11:30.332-05:002011-04-06T09:11:30.332-05:00PS - When I write septolets, the form is slightly ...PS - When I write septolets, the form is slightly different. I found the form here:<br />http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html<br /><br />The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.<br />•Fourteen words<br />•Seven lines<br />•Two related stanzas<br />•Create an image or pictureMariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58807733357718546492011-04-06T08:57:07.085-05:002011-04-06T08:57:07.085-05:00Oh my stars! How did I miss this yesterday? You ha...Oh my stars! How did I miss this yesterday? You have created a wonderful piece here, Pamela, redolent with the happy memories of a well-loved place. I can almost smell the delicious bakery aromas wafting on the morning breezes. And thank you for mentioning me! You are so kind!!!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21017374199356241752011-04-06T03:18:35.369-05:002011-04-06T03:18:35.369-05:00how true ! oft it is the scent and the aromas that...how true ! oft it is the scent and the aromas that almost always evoke a good or bad memory...splendid thoughtSonika Uppalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263821952822391180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1617785636289688252011-04-06T02:58:07.231-05:002011-04-06T02:58:07.231-05:00A simple truth, well told.
I like the form.A simple truth, well told.<br /><br />I like the form.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35199200356955455192011-04-05T23:34:51.083-05:002011-04-05T23:34:51.083-05:00I gave this a try.But I haven't the skill to c...<a href="target" rel="nofollow">I gave this a try</a>.But I haven't the skill to construct such a vivid image with so few words.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45703816992254992472011-04-05T21:25:50.470-05:002011-04-05T21:25:50.470-05:00These are well constructed, Pamela. You bring the...These are well constructed, Pamela. You bring the reader to a different setting with smell. It works. Scent is such a driving force. <br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-75610294718088886372011-04-05T20:45:54.679-05:002011-04-05T20:45:54.679-05:00I like the call to the senses these wafting whiffs...I like the call to the senses these wafting whiffs of the words give out, pamela. I've not tried the septolet--the shorter forms are, the more they rack my brains--but you make it look easy here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-92168635674180869242011-04-05T20:31:55.663-05:002011-04-05T20:31:55.663-05:00very nice Pam and thank you for the lesson...I am ...very nice Pam and thank you for the lesson...I am learning so much about poetry from everyone...this is one I still have to try...this is a good month to try them all...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30797669920190872662011-04-05T19:04:12.894-05:002011-04-05T19:04:12.894-05:00Wow! You painted such a vivid picture with almost ...Wow! You painted such a vivid picture with almost no paint! Fantastic.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5152041067202941742011-04-05T18:20:52.571-05:002011-04-05T18:20:52.571-05:00nice...this is spot on...many a place carries a sc...nice...this is spot on...many a place carries a scent that lingers with me...that bring back memories...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-74856167204548911352011-04-05T18:09:43.087-05:002011-04-05T18:09:43.087-05:00opps. meant "succinct"opps. meant "succinct"dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66002072704893861482011-04-05T18:08:49.984-05:002011-04-05T18:08:49.984-05:00The form sets up a dramatic pause on time and endi...The form sets up a dramatic pause on time and ending with thought. Cool effect. Succint capture of the moment.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40499960543097112152011-04-05T18:06:46.297-05:002011-04-05T18:06:46.297-05:00I like this form, Pamela, and will give it a go la...I like this form, Pamela, and will give it a go later today or tomorrow. But you do it honor with imagery that wafts off the page. Nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37077402921028243062011-04-05T17:36:59.823-05:002011-04-05T17:36:59.823-05:00Cool form and wonderful little poem!Cool form and wonderful little poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28687889286050766692011-04-05T17:36:17.732-05:002011-04-05T17:36:17.732-05:00I've never seen this form before. Nicely done....I've never seen this form before. Nicely done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46401156873933450012011-04-05T17:36:10.123-05:002011-04-05T17:36:10.123-05:00Wonderful form. I will have to try this. I love t...Wonderful form. I will have to try this. I love the poem full of scent and now I'm hungry for pastry!Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.com