She places gold and silver filigree on divine shelves
that reach to the sky and mixes clouds with mist
caught high up in the golden trees with shiny leaves
that never turn or rust even in tiresome times
She places her hands upon lightness while flurries
of indecision trouble spirits wandering alone
searching for comfort from frigid tones
where ice and slippery landslides cascade. . .
Forming shadows on the heart
she places everything where it belongs
so no metal, iron, clay nor stone walls
can obstruct the flow . . .
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
A beautiful tribute to your mom. I hope she loves it! "she places her hands upon lightness".........a beautiful rendering of a woman who sounds amazing. I love it.
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ReplyDeleteThanks and I have to tell you she passed just 5 years ago. If she is watching from above ... I hope she likes it. She was truly amazing!
Pamela
Beautiful; I love the imagery! You do Mom proud!
ReplyDeleteIt is woven like a tapestry...
Thanks Ellie and certainly hope so!
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A wonderfully vivid piece! Excellent take on the prompt!
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I love the thought of your mom ensuring nothing 'can obstruct the flow'..easing the way for others to join her in that beautiful place. She sounds a wonderful woman, both on this earth and in the heavenly world she prepares so lovingly now. This poem is wonderful...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Pamela. The image that stays with me is placing everything where it belongs so nothing can obstruct the flow!
ReplyDeleteA lovely tribute to your Mom, Pamela. My favorite line 'nothing can obstruct the flow'... poignant and beautiful!
ReplyDeletePamela,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely tribute to your mother.
The comfort of a reasssuring thought..
The wise sage...
Beautiful,
Eileen
lovely poem,
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Wonderfully written Pamela :D A beautiful dedication<3
ReplyDeleteshe places everything where it belongs ... just wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Weasel and thanks for an inspiring prompt!
ReplyDeletePamela
traveler that she was and thanks for visiting!
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Mary thank you and she was a wonderful woman!
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Diane thank you!
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Thanks Eileen!
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Thanks Jingle and thanks for the award!
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Thanks riika!
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Thanks deb and thanks for visiting!
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Pamela this is such a beautiful and touching tribute to your Mom. A lovely poem indeed!
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Thanks so much Carrie!
ReplyDeletePamela
Hi Pam, very nice tribute indeed and I also especially like the closing image, keeping the flow - very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks rch!
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