"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

`the only way round it` monday poetry potluck-Kings, Queens and Warriors

You may pass for a shilling into the grotto

As intravenous superfluous desire

trembles inside you

An ebb tide comes back

Larceny is not extinct

Pugnacious with your poor query

Listen to this

Succumb

The trees

Noon dwarfs as you paddle

to be conventional with your art

Listen to this

as I obfuscate

An oval queen has become kingly

Can you hear it?

6 comments:

  1. an oval queen has become kingly,
    what fun!
    girls do rule...
    cool poem!

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  2. perfect rhythms and rhymes..
    love reading it aloud.
    thanks for the contribution.
    Happy Tuesday!
    hope that you have fun visiting a few poets from our list.

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  3. I love the way you use words in a beautiful descriptive way, it sets the stage for a "King and Queen" in a beautiful lyrical poem.

    Joanny
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

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  4. An old world feel to it. Well wrought. "Larceny is not extinct." I like that particularly. Not sure way. Maybe because it's true!

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  5. http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/10/october-birthday-wishes-and-awards.html

    awards,
    pass to 1 to 10 friends..
    Happy Weekend!
    xxx

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  6. Its so nicely done... I started enjoying your first few lines
    " As intravenous superfluous desire
    trembles inside you.."

    and the lending was great... loved it.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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