"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Thursday, September 2, 2010

a chance encounter poets united #13 kiss

A softness of touch feels like feathers wisping by.
Sending shivers of pleasure through the particles: mine
Coloured rose upon labios plump: soft.
Brush against each other to meet suspended in time.
It is lingering, caressing, consuming: a first kiss.

20 comments:

  1. Awesome post, Pamela! Wonderfully written! =)

    -Weasel

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  2. Beautiful and gentle poem, Pamela!

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  3. Thanks Mary! I know not my normal style as of late.
    Pamela

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  4. lovely soft and beautiful kiss --- a lingering kiss...nice...bkm

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  5. "Feels like feathers wisping by"...Such beautiful imagery in this poem Pamela! I love it!
    :-)

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  6. I love the feeling of feathers! Clearly beautiful!

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  7. Tender and passionate....really nice!!! Love this~

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  8. From the first line to the last, the poem whispers its tender tone and meaning. Wonderful Pamela.

    Elizabeth

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  9. Oh yes, I vaguely remember now.....:) Beautifully written. Sounds even better than chocolate:)

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  10. Your soft and sensitive words form a gentle kiss of their own..just lovely!

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  11. Carrie I am glad you liked it!
    Pamela

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  12. Elizabeth what a nice thing to say.
    Pamela

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  13. It can be Sherry and thanks!
    Pamela

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  14. ilane thanks and thanks for visiting!
    Pamela

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    awards for you.
    please pick 3 or 4 from my post and share each with 1 to 5 friends...

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