A softness of touch feels like feathers wisping by.
Sending shivers of pleasure through the particles: mine
Coloured rose upon labios plump: soft.
Brush against each other to meet suspended in time.
It is lingering, caressing, consuming: a first kiss.
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Awesome post, Pamela! Wonderfully written! =)
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Beautiful and gentle poem, Pamela!
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Thanks Mary! I know not my normal style as of late.
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lovely soft and beautiful kiss --- a lingering kiss...nice...bkm
ReplyDelete"Feels like feathers wisping by"...Such beautiful imagery in this poem Pamela! I love it!
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I love the feeling of feathers! Clearly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteTender and passionate....really nice!!! Love this~
ReplyDeleteFrom the first line to the last, the poem whispers its tender tone and meaning. Wonderful Pamela.
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Oh yes, I vaguely remember now.....:) Beautifully written. Sounds even better than chocolate:)
ReplyDeleteYour soft and sensitive words form a gentle kiss of their own..just lovely!
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Carrie I am glad you liked it!
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Me, too! Thanks Diane!
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Thanks so much, Ellie!
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Elizabeth what a nice thing to say.
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It can be Sherry and thanks!
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ilane thanks and thanks for visiting!
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