"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Mine we write poems color scheme #21

Cobalt blue carries through, it strikes. Red sums up the feelings of anger. Combined it is the purple of royalty that rushes in with great awry. Felt under the light blue sky. Flash red - yellow of the orange sun, with its heat. It floats here in this universe, set them free. Bursts, splashes and splatters to the foreground. Mixed together, becoming a kaleidoscope of colours.
Blue red yellow green
These colours fly around me
Combined, they are mine
Posted by flaubert at 2:25 AM

22 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2010 at 4:48 AM

    I love colour in poems.

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  2. MarySeptember 29, 2010 at 6:26 AM

    Pamela, you have used color well in this poem...but I would say that no color is predominant, though for me here red has the strongest 'voice.'

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  3. UnknownSeptember 29, 2010 at 7:20 AM

    Pretty much a primary colour girl, which is probably very appropriate for Mexico!

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  4. Diane TSeptember 29, 2010 at 7:23 AM

    Pamela, you are like me... love all colors except black, white, brown and navy, LOL. I love this haibun form of poetry.

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  5. ElizabethSeptember 29, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    Pamela, you go girl, you are dancing and splashing all over that canvas. And that last line is soooooooooooo right. Colors don't speak unless we own them,

    Elizabeth

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  6. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:12 AM

    Thanks Tilly and one of my first poems I wrote was about colours.
    Pamela

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  7. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:14 AM

    Thanks Mary and red is a very dominant colour in my belief.
    Pamela

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  8. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    Derrick, yes here in Mexico you can find a lot of vibrant colours. Viva Mexico!
    Pamela

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  9. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:18 AM

    Thanks Diane and I love colours!
    Pamela

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  10. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    Elizabeth that is so true!
    Thanks!
    Pamela

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:48 AM

    great work with the fragmented sentences and prose-like look. you get some really chaotic energy from that.

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  12. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:54 AM

    Nice post. I am an artist too but love to paint with words.

    Melanie

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  13. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 12:35 PM

    Barb, thanks for that.
    Painting at times seems chaotic.
    Pamela

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  14. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 12:36 PM

    Melanie thanks for visiting and colours are a wonderful thing.
    Pamela

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  15. MarianVSeptember 29, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    A bright sunny day in Mexico! I love the colors there. Nice haibun (some day I am going to write "hairbun"

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  16. flaubertSeptember 29, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    Sounds like fun Marian!;)
    Pamela

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  17. LindaSeptember 29, 2010 at 5:29 PM

    Yes, its amazing what those colors can do.

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  18. JamieDedesSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:02 PM

    Very ... colorful! Well done ... write on target.

    Poem on ...

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  19. gautami tripathySeptember 30, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    and same as mine too!

    colours lay bare my soul

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  20. flaubertOctober 1, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    True Linda.
    Pamela

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  21. flaubertOctober 1, 2010 at 11:15 AM

    Thanks Jamie!
    Pamela

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  22. flaubertOctober 1, 2010 at 11:15 AM

    Colours everywhere Gautami!
    Pamela

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