"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Saturday, September 4, 2010

music is ... writer's island #19 breakthrough

oration is triumphant with wonder
as movement is finely seeped in cleaves
syncopation returning and encapsulating
sown and ladled thickly on surfaces smooth
cunning as worn with erosion on its
crowded paths of blistering sunbursts
run in brilliant waves of purple hues hanging
in florescent green with sparkles of light
that seem to breakthrough sound softly
Posted by flaubert at 1:19 PM

22 comments:

  1. MarySeptember 4, 2010 at 1:28 PM

    So many wonderful images in this poem, Pamela!

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  2. Carrie Van HornSeptember 4, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    Yes, Pamela this is full of images of wonder and beauty...lovely writing! :-)

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  3. ElizabethSeptember 4, 2010 at 1:53 PM

    Pamela, you are a word slinger of high level. Love this line "run in brilliant waves of purple hues" simply because I've had that experience when listening to certain music.

    Elizabeth

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  4. Diane TSeptember 4, 2010 at 3:01 PM

    Ah that florescent green! Love the idea of syncopation, too! A brilliant breakthrough!

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  5. anthonynorthSeptember 4, 2010 at 4:54 PM

    Marvellous words, full of imagery.

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  6. gautami tripathySeptember 4, 2010 at 9:17 PM

    Wonderful use of some great words.

    ode to shoes

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2010 at 5:07 AM

    Pamela, you've carried on in the wonderful-wordle-yourself vein, with some marvellous words, beautifully put together. Do you use music to write by?

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  8. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:34 AM

    Viv, funny you should say that in fact I was listening to Tchaikovsky's Swan Lake when I wrote this. And I also did a bit of automatic writing. Thanks.
    Pamela

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  9. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:35 AM

    Thanks Mary!
    Pamela

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  10. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    Thanks so much Carrie!
    Pamela

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  11. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    Thanks Elizabeth!
    Tchaikovsky inspired me for this poem.
    Pamela

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  12. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:38 AM

    Diane thank you!
    Pamela

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  13. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM

    Thanks Anthony!
    Pamela

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  14. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    Thanks Gautami!
    Pamela

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  15. WeaselSeptember 5, 2010 at 11:48 AM

    An excellent post! Wonderful breakthrough! =)

    -Weasel

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  16. flaubertSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:02 PM

    Thanks Weasel!
    Pamela

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2010 at 1:29 AM

    Beautiful sceneries :D My eyes are been charmed XD

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  18. SusannahSeptember 6, 2010 at 3:28 AM

    "syncopation returning and encapsulating"
    What wonderful words, I have said this sentance over and over again I love how it sounds. ;-)

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  19. flaubertSeptember 6, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    riika thanks!
    Pamela

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  20. flaubertSeptember 6, 2010 at 9:21 AM

    Susannah
    Thanks for commenting and visiting!
    Pamela

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  21. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2010 at 1:35 PM

    Love the use of syncopation, Pamela.

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  22. flaubertSeptember 8, 2010 at 11:41 AM

    Thanks Tilly!
    Pamela

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