A vessel that holds liquid
within its circumference
never leaking out
left to evaporate
leaving behind a film
which can’t be erased
A line that has been drawn
with invisible accuracy
you know it exists and
no-one may cross over
A well formed tunnel
built beneath a river
with one way in and out,
no u-turns permitted
A deep well with walls
made of iron and glass
hoping the glass doesn’t
shatter from too much abuse
Sending slivers flying in
a wrong direction,
piercing the surrounds of
laws, rules, regulations
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
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Nice imagery here and I like the last stanza in particular, shattering our regulated surroundings!
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Oh, wow, Pam. Not sure if this is what you intended, but has me thinking of border restrictions, immigration. Powerful.
ReplyDeletevivid and powerful imagery,
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A++
Interesting piece...I enjoyed your pictures as well.
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I dig these water-themed metaphores. They're physical, yet emotional. Nice Potluck dish!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit Jessica.
ReplyDeleteVictoria, not my intention, but it does read that way.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jingle. I love potluck!
ReplyDeleteLynn, thanks to both and for the visit.
ReplyDeleteEric, thanks for that.
ReplyDeleteThe title definitely brings this piece full circle...you always write with such depth...definitely a pleasure to read your words...ONE::
ReplyDeleteA very creative and inspiring poem. A delight to read, much enjoyed. Thanks. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks dasuntoucha, with depth maybe, but clarity, no.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and the kind words.