Te quiero, mi amor …
signs we give to others
Mi vida …
symbols of ourselves.
We wind round a spiral catching
the wind in our hands.
As if dipping into saccharine sweetness,
like syrup that attracts honeybees.
Apis mellifera
A sincere gesture,
symbolic nature of a soft caress against
an arm, a kiss upon the cheek,
it’s the sign of friendship.
Romance in a foreign language
deciphers truth and love,
like a light that shines through the darkest tunnel,
clearing up the way.
Pinpricks of speckled awareness of
languages, signs and symbols.
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Pamela - I think this poem is a perfect example for why I love (and follow)your work - you have a way of making sense out of the nebulous while still retaining your sense of wonder.
ReplyDelete"Pinpricks of speckled awareness," is amazing,
"Romance in a foreign language
ReplyDeletedeciphers truth and love,
like a light that shines through the darkest tunnel,"
Magnificent write...love this perspective. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.
romantic take..what a refreshing perspective, well done.
ReplyDeleteA++
...Romance in a foreign language
ReplyDeletedeciphers truth and love,
like a light that shines through the darkest tunnel,
clearing up the way.
Pinpricks of speckled awareness of
languages, signs and symbols...
...beautiful words...felt.
great romaticism in this.. thank you for sharing.. my potluck is here: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/my-whole-world/
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand all the words, but I liked the way you said them. Nice Potluck piece!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the melding of English and Spanish. The idea of "pinpricks of speckled awareness" is so right on. I try to live in awareness but it is oh so speckled. Thank you for a lovely poem.Going back for a second read!
ReplyDeleteThanks RJ and I am glad you enjoy my work.
ReplyDelete1meremortal,
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting.
Thank you Jingle.
ReplyDeletedasuntoucha, happy they were felt.
ReplyDeletefiveloaf thanks.
ReplyDeleteEric,
ReplyDeletete quiero-I love you or I want you
mi amor-my love
mi vida-my life
all terms of endearment in Spanish.
Thanks.
Speckled awareness is part of life Victoria.
ReplyDeleteThanks.