Are you still sitting in the aisle seat with a long face?
Watching the silent movie,
trying to catch the humorous lines.
Tears fill the eyes of the audience,
but if laughter filled the theatre,
wouldn’t that turn things around?
You would stand out like the actors before you
not wanting to sit in that chair, staring
at the screen, attempting to figure out
how you fit … into an invisible scheme.
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
great post. stumbled on your blog from square corner. how do we fit into an invisible scheme?
ReplyDeletemdog
I love the theatre/silent movie setting for your poem, Laughter filling a theatre can definitely turn things around for a show, but not necessarily a person in the audience, particularly one who does not want to sit there and laugh,
ReplyDeleteIsn't it curious that some of the time we want to be invisible and at others it is last thing we want! I too loved your setting in the movie theatre as a parallel for life itself.
ReplyDeleteLovely piece. I know I've been the one in the aisle seat at times. Enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeletehappens to me sometimes... how i wish to be invisible at such times...
ReplyDeleteliked it and even shared it among my frnds :)
dropping by from SS!
Oh, I love it! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteNice one. Really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Graven.
ReplyDeleteRJ, isn't life like a movie?
ReplyDeleteoldegg, sometimes it is good to be invisible.
ReplyDeleteHaven't we all Nita Jo.
ReplyDeleteThanks for that warmsunshine.
ReplyDeleteGlad you did Annell.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dani.
ReplyDeleteI love your title picture on your Blog, beautiful, great scribblngs too :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit Natalie.
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