you show up at my door with a 2L bottle of chlorophyll water
tell me it’s good for my health while smoking organic cigarettes
then on our first official date you ask
want to visit Elva B. Shoecraft
she lives in the cemetery by my house
Process notes: I met Michael (my partner now for 14 years) through a mutual friend. I was totally mesmerized from the second I saw and spoke to him. He is brilliant, handsome and a bit eccentric. I was however a little concerned about the cemetery thing. Until I saw the cemetery it was small and quaint and very old. He taught me about how last names long ago were associated with the family or the person’s occupation. Well I thought it was interesting. ;)
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eccentric is GOOD...and a cemetery is a great place to day dream...and write poetry....and drink good wine.....all done with TASTE....nice tanka also
ReplyDeleteHope you didn't go out with that guy!
ReplyDeleteNothing like an impromptu and highly unusual date, go girl! ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for getting in the experience as tanka too.
Alan
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cemetarys are heavenly ya know no matter what the hour... so happy you found a lasting love... erotic engine
ReplyDeleteCemetery is an interesting date, by the person's house is a little strange. The Tanka experience is a new thing for me, so it was really great to be exposed to this style. Nice work!
ReplyDelete-Weasel
Very original! I like the tanka and the story!
ReplyDeleteWow, now that's a first date!
ReplyDeleteThat's making a good first impression :).
ReplyDeletePamela, I love this. Makes me smile :)
ReplyDeletePamela, Now that's a memorable first date invite! Nice job, as always.
ReplyDeleteShari
Nice work,original and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteMarinela x
Marinela,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the nice comment!
Pamela
Really love this, Pamela. I'm a big fan of eccentricity!
ReplyDeleteWayne: Yes, I agree. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteRall: He is my present partner
Alan: Thank you so much!
Pieceofpie: Thank you
Weasel: Thanks!
Robin: Thanks!
Dan: Sure is. Isn't it.
Francis: no,kidding!
Uma:Thanks
Shari:Thanks
Jason:Me,too! Thanks
Hey everybody this is not my usual style of commenting but I am so tired.
that's a great first date story! and a great idea to write about!
ReplyDeleteCarolee,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! And it is all true.
Pamela