Please pull a rug up
Join me ‘round the campfire on this lovely winter evening
To listen to the tale of Janey Alison White
A blind girl from the Appalachian Trail
Living in a house made of wattle and daub, a red chimney atop
Maestra of marionette kiddy shows for a pence
Cocinar extraordinaire “consume de pansa” her speciality
Massages given for free (well if she liked you that is)
She collected pumice stones
which were stowed away in a pail out in the garage
She loved strumming her guitar under the stars by a torch
Wearing only a fringe leather jacket and a silly yellow hat with flaps
Laughter came from someone in the group
“Don’t laugh. She was a great talent in her time”
She made the finest pickle jam anyone in these parts had ever tasted
Someone in the group startled me and asked
“How did she come to be blind?”
Sad story really: the husband tore out her eyes with his long talons
He was jealous
She was a much better poet than him
Listen everybody I am getting tired I need to head back home
I think my behind is bruised from sitting too long
“Could someone pass me my jug of octopus wine?”
Oh I have forgotten my walker this evening
This limp is bad tonight good thing I always have my cane with me
It is hell trying to get around when you can’t see
*Process notes: I used all of the words except "lever and tome". My favourite sound is laughter and consume de pansa tastes horrible to me. It is a soup made from the stomach of either cow or pig. And it is very popular in Mexico.
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Nice character. I would have liked to have met her. And good use of so many of the words! I enjoy coming here!
ReplyDeleteOnly Footprints,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much and I enjoy you visiting.
Pamela
Pamela - this is one of my favorite kind of characters, someone who's experienced dreadful things yet exudes joy. I'm assuming that playing guitar wearing only a leather jacket symbolizes joy.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I really enjoyed this piece!
ReplyDeleteJDM,
ReplyDeleteShe is joyful indeed! Thanks!
Pamela
Weasel,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I am so glad you did!
Pamela
What an imagination to create this character.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this Pam.
Rall,
ReplyDeleteThanks! I also enjoyed yours it made me chuckle this morning.
Pamela
I'm a little embarassed I had to look up daub. :-)
ReplyDeletePamela, like a campfire story - there you have another prompt. Loved this story...
ReplyDeleteI really like the phrase "a house made of wattle and daub", and the story as a whole. I don't think I could stomach "consume de panza" either :P.
ReplyDeleteEvelyn,
ReplyDeleteDon't be daub was sometimes made out of animal dung. Yucky, huh? Thanks for stopping by.
Pamela
Uma,
ReplyDeleteThank you. You are so sweet! This was not that easy. But i love wordles!
Pamela
Francis,
ReplyDeleteThanks for you comment. And yes consume de panza is just gross!
Pamela
nice one Pam....i posted real late.....busy day in the mountains...i really liked doing this poem...fun....and thanks for hanging around to read..
ReplyDeleteWayne my friend I am always so happy to read your poetry. Thanks!
ReplyDeletePamela
Wonderful story. I was totally drawn in. Well done, Pamela!
ReplyDelete~Mark
Mark,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much and I am glad you stopped by.
Pamela
Fun and totally summed the prompt. I liked the narrative.
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Doug
Doug,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment!
Pamela