The Spring Break massacre
Happened over the oyster bar on Fifth
Welcome back Courtney Love
Even if you don’t like the idea
She says “Laura Bush has gay friends”
The Spring Break massacre
Staring at Sapphic Romance portraits
New York happy hours all round the clock
During a conversation with a human centipede
Mayor Bloomberg called out on education for the kids
The Spring Break massacre
You don’t say “A stray remark haunts Brown?”
They approve the big wind farm off Cape Cod
Just another evening out with friends
In “The city that never sleeps”
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
I love this mash of headlines. I bet you miss NYC sometimes.Your Mariachi band is trying to break down Miss Pommeroy's bathroom door.Could you have a word?
ReplyDeleteNothing like keeping your finger on the pulse, Pamela!
ReplyDeleteThat "Spring Break massacre" line has this weight to it that can't be explained, and all the images dangle off it like Christmas ornaments... wonderful construction and arrangement of images. :)
ReplyDeleteRall,
ReplyDeleteMuchas gracias!I've tried telephoning them. They are bad boys what can I say. ;)
Pamela
I am trying Derrick. Really I am.
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Joseph,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment. I miss NYC so much!
Pamela
Rall,
ReplyDeleteI miss NYC all the time.
Pamela
Love the way you've linked these lines together, and I like the way you've repeated the line,
ReplyDelete"The spring break massacre." Nicely done!
Nice collage of headlines. The first line of "Spring Break Massacre' really sets off yor stanzas. I really like the "Human centipede" line.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
~Mark
I like the repetition of the first line, and the mix of stories gives a nice hectic feeling of the city. I'd like to meet that human centipede :).
ReplyDeleteMarianne,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I enjoyed this prompt after I had given it some thought.
Pamela
Mark,
ReplyDeleteThanks! This was fun. The human centipede is a new horror movie from a Dutch Filmmaker named Tom Six.
Pamela
Francis,
ReplyDeleteThanks and I don't think you want to meet the human centipede. It's a new horror movie.
Pamela
a range of emotions with colorful images... i laughed outloud thinkin of laura bush and courtney love... and the best the bloomberg talkin to a nyc centipede.. tho the repetitive massacre line kept the poem firmly weighed in reality a life in the day
ReplyDeleteFantastic what you've done with this Pamela. It really works!
ReplyDeletePoP,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much.
Pamela
Erin,
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Pamela
Well reported! And the repetition holds this together nicely!!
ReplyDeleteI agree.
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Andy,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Pamela
Tillybud,
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Pamela
The iconic American Wind Farmer. How long till we start seeing the cigarette and cologne adverts?
ReplyDeleteNo telling Dan!
ReplyDeletePamela
I love the refrain of the spring break massacre. I love the human centipede line.
ReplyDeleteJames,
ReplyDeleteThank you. I am glad you liked it.
Pamela