Wait for a sign, indeed. Nice work!
how beautiful!wonderful work, Pamela!
hey hey Pam...nice one again...personal for sure...thanks for sharing..couple of our friends just got back from Mexico...as we sait to go back to Cuba in Oct...take care
this has a stream of consciousness feeling to it, i like it. and i like the repetition of "infinity." very intriguing ideas here.
I like the idea that you can trace your fingers around a person's skin forever. A lovely form of infinity.
Infinity! phew, now you're talking!!
Yeah, I've experienced that kind of 'infinity', It was lovely while it lasted!
Dan,Thanks so much! I enjoyed yours as well!Pamela
Angie,You are too kind! Thanks for stopping by.Pamela
Wayne,My friend thanks! I thought yours was so funny. I enjoyed it! Where did your friends go in Mexico? Cuba cool!Pamela
Richelle,Thanks so much! Thanks for stopping by and commenting.Pamela
Veronica,Thank you and thank you for commenting.Pamela
James,It is very sensual! You should try it sometime. Thanks for commenting and visiting.Pamela
Andy,You got that right, phew! Thanks for stopping by.Pamela
Eryl,I am still experiencing it. 14 years and counting, I am a lucky lady! Thanks for commenting.Pamela
Another lovely romantic poem...have you considered o putting together a chapbook with a love theme?
I like the way you have used "infinity" through-out your poem. Your words flow effortlessly from one stanza to the next ...
Kristen,Thanks so much! I always enjoy your comments on my work. I really enjoyed yours as well. I would love to put a chapbook together but wouldn't know where to start.Any pointers?Pamela
Marianne,Thank you so much! That is such a nice compliment!Pamela
Nice image of infinity, and the picture fits it perfectly too.
Sheila,Thank you for the kind words. The pic is lovely isn't it?Pamela
I am always impressed when someone can manage to write a love poem without descending into the serious cringe and heave department.Good one Pam.
Rall,I too hate the cringe and heave department. Who wants to spend their time wading through sap. Thanks so much for your kind words.Pamela
So sensual! I like it!
Pamela:This is beautiful! It gave me the sense of floating in something ethereal and lovely. So sensual! is exactly what came to my mind, too. Very nice!Shari
Poetry as a lover. I can relate. Nice interpretation of the prompt. Thanks for leaving your link on my site. I enjoyed reading through your recent posts. Be back soon.
I'm with Sheila and Marianne... the use of "infinity" repeatedly made for a delightful touchstone...I am behind on my comments too, so much to do with my travels last week...
Jenna,Thanks so much for the nice comment.Pamela
Shari,Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Thanks so much!Pamela
Erin,Thanks for the nice comment.Pamela
Julie,Thanks for the lovely comment. And thanks for stopping by.Pamela
How tender and affectionate! Lovely! I particularly like the last stanza, with the who knows what will happen element!