pheromones
whirling through my senses
of infinity
round and round
scents of you, pleasurable
hold me fixed, caress my skin
infinity
you touch my hair
kiss my lips
gaze into my eyes
infinity exists
trace my finger on your skin
the shape of the neverending
with no beginning, no end
sign of infinity
what happens next?
wait for a sign
till the morning comes
infinity finally leaves me
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Wait for a sign, indeed. Nice work!
ReplyDeletehow beautiful!
ReplyDeletewonderful work, Pamela!
hey hey Pam...nice one again...personal for sure...thanks for sharing..couple of our friends just got back from Mexico...as we sait to go back to Cuba in Oct...take care
ReplyDeletethis has a stream of consciousness feeling to it, i like it. and i like the repetition of "infinity." very intriguing ideas here.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea that you can trace your fingers around a person's skin forever. A lovely form of infinity.
ReplyDeleteInfinity! phew, now you're talking!!
ReplyDeleteYeah, I've experienced that kind of 'infinity', It was lovely while it lasted!
ReplyDeleteDan,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I enjoyed yours as well!
Pamela
Angie,
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind! Thanks for stopping by.
Pamela
Wayne,
ReplyDeleteMy friend thanks! I thought yours was so funny. I enjoyed it! Where did your friends go in Mexico? Cuba cool!
Pamela
Richelle,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Pamela
Veronica,
ReplyDeleteThank you and thank you for commenting.
Pamela
James,
ReplyDeleteIt is very sensual! You should try it sometime. Thanks for commenting and visiting.
Pamela
Andy,
ReplyDeleteYou got that right, phew! Thanks for stopping by.
Pamela
Eryl,
ReplyDeleteI am still experiencing it. 14 years and counting, I am a lucky lady! Thanks for commenting.
Pamela
Another lovely romantic poem...have you considered o putting together a chapbook with a love theme?
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used "infinity" through-out your poem. Your words flow effortlessly from one stanza to the next ...
ReplyDeleteKristen,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I always enjoy your comments on my work. I really enjoyed yours as well. I would love to put a chapbook together but wouldn't know where to start.
Any pointers?
Pamela
Marianne,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! That is such a nice compliment!
Pamela
Nice image of infinity, and the picture fits it perfectly too.
ReplyDeleteSheila,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words. The pic is lovely isn't it?
Pamela
I am always impressed when someone can manage to write a love poem without descending into the serious cringe and heave department.Good one Pam.
ReplyDeleteRall,
ReplyDeleteI too hate the cringe and heave department. Who wants to spend their time wading through sap. Thanks so much for your kind words.
Pamela
So sensual! I like it!
ReplyDeletePamela:
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! It gave me the sense of floating in something ethereal and lovely. So sensual! is exactly what came to my mind, too. Very nice!
Shari
Poetry as a lover. I can relate. Nice interpretation of the prompt. Thanks for leaving your link on my site. I enjoyed reading through your recent posts. Be back soon.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Sheila and Marianne... the use of "infinity" repeatedly made for a delightful touchstone...
ReplyDeleteI am behind on my comments too, so much to do with my travels last week...
Jenna,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the nice comment.
Pamela
Shari,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting. Thanks so much!
Pamela
Erin,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment.
Pamela
Julie,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the lovely comment. And thanks for stopping by.
Pamela
How tender and affectionate! Lovely! I particularly like the last stanza, with the who knows what will happen element!
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