Pamela, this is amazing! So much meaning packed into this handful of words. Cinquain? Must try. You did it up nicely, indeed. Another, less cynical look at creation, love, Amy http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/creation-circles/
All that a critic, as critic, can give poets is the deadly encouragement that never ceases to remind them of how heavy their inheritance is. Harold Bloom
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The cinquain is charming, Pamela. Look how much information and sensory imagery you packed into just eleven words [and that includes the title!].
ReplyDeleteMargo, this could be an addictive form for me, thanks:)
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ReplyDeletePamela, this is amazing! So much meaning packed into this handful of words. Cinquain? Must try. You did it up nicely, indeed.
ReplyDeleteAnother, less cynical look at creation, love, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/creation-circles/
Beautiful cinquain, Pamela!
ReplyDeleteThanks am, much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteI loved writing this, Amy. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary. Margo has very interesting writing prompts on Tuesdays.
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice Pamela. Being of Scandinavian descent, I can relate. :) I'll check out Margo's site. Thanks for the tip.
ReplyDelete~Brenda
Thanks Brenda. Yes, Margo has some excellent exercises to flex the poetry muscles. You should take a look at her prompts on Tuesdays.
ReplyDeleteI like your 'personal' cinquain. This form is fun, and so versatile.
ReplyDeleteThanks Viv. I had fun writing this one. I believe they could be addictive.
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