"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Wednesday, June 23, 2010

My life we write poems wordle #7







A drought has come

I won’t drown

I obsess

I am happy

nervous

mad

Sorrow circles in a bad carbon sea

Glacial winds blow in on your birthday

18 comments:

  1. Pamela, This is so simple, yet says so much. I love it! and brrrr......

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  2. Hi Pamela, I really like the tone of the narrator. I think the final couplet worked obliquely. Also made me think of the Gulf oil spill.-Irene

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  3. It never seems to be a good time for a celebration.

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  4. Brenda
    Thanks for the comment!
    Pamela

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  5. Thanks Irene great prompt!
    Pamela

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  6. Pamela, you can crystallize so much in so few words. Glacial winds INDEED blow on birthdays!

    http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/drought-wordle.html

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  7. Sometimes are good for it Stan!
    Pamela

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  8. That's as economical a use of the wordle as I've seen. I love the mix of emotions.

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  9. Thanks Francis I have been trying to write these wordles brief!
    Pamela

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  10. hi pam, before i forget i love, love love the picture of flaubert, his expression is priceless... i like how you used the wordles..it is like a kite flying

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  11. Thanks so much he is a wonderful dog!
    Thanks for the comment!
    Pamela

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  12. Agreed -- an economical use of the words, and your placement of them casts a tincture of blue over the whole poem. Nicely done.

    -Nicole

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