This is just lovely, Pamela. I especially like "nature's embroidered landscape."
yes i just visited the join between the river and the sea here, the mist and the seaweed.
Wow. Compact!! Nicely done...doesn't seemed forced whatsoever. Great work, Pamela!
Beautiful picture! I love the river's mist in the morning, that's one of the best expressions of nature.
Super, Pamela. You've created a lovely image. Do you need the "on" after supersedes?
For lack of time, it ended up being quite short, Paula.
It is Mary:)
I hadn't though about it, Viv. I took it out, works better now.
That was fantastic! I love it!
Lovely, Pamela .. and I like the way you used "embroidered!"
A lovely poem. It was nice to see you write something short, showing your range.
Lovely alliteration of "s" sounds creates a softly musical atmosphere! And the last line is a drop of magic!
The brevity took nothing away. It said what it had to say. Admirable.
Pamela, How weird, I thought I'd commented on this yesterday. Maybe I read it and thought I'd come back? I love this piece. It is more concise than you usually write, and you rise to that very well. I especially like the two final lines. Beautiful.~Brenda
Love the image you have created, one of my favorites. And that last line is perfect. Thanks for visiting the collab,Elizabeth
Pamela, concise and lovely. I like "tiny molecules not seen" and how it's about the evaporation of water before and/or about the seaweed below the surface after.Richard
Thanks to everyone else for the nice comments.
Now I like this. Very tight use of the words. A talent I don't have. Very nice. I posted ne late.