"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Thursday, May 26, 2011

"Bessie" Tuesday Tryouts with Margo Roby at wordgathering-cinquain


Bessie

milk maiden
small wooden stool
Nebraska cold morning chill
butter

12 comments:

  1. The cinquain is charming, Pamela. Look how much information and sensory imagery you packed into just eleven words [and that includes the title!].

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  2. Margo, this could be an addictive form for me, thanks:)

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  3. Pamela, this is amazing! So much meaning packed into this handful of words. Cinquain? Must try. You did it up nicely, indeed.
    Another, less cynical look at creation, love, Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/creation-circles/

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  4. Beautiful cinquain, Pamela!

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  5. Thanks am, much appreciated.

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  6. I loved writing this, Amy. Thanks.

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  7. Thanks Mary. Margo has very interesting writing prompts on Tuesdays.

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  8. This is really nice Pamela. Being of Scandinavian descent, I can relate. :) I'll check out Margo's site. Thanks for the tip.

    ~Brenda

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  9. Thanks Brenda. Yes, Margo has some excellent exercises to flex the poetry muscles. You should take a look at her prompts on Tuesdays.

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  10. I like your 'personal' cinquain. This form is fun, and so versatile.

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  11. Thanks Viv. I had fun writing this one. I believe they could be addictive.

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