tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post5936721359265241770..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Molecular Structure A whirl of Wordling Sundays-#3Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40963583432172901542011-05-18T15:42:36.740-05:002011-05-18T15:42:36.740-05:00Lovely imagery.Lovely imagery.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10058075634425759622011-05-13T22:19:02.774-05:002011-05-13T22:19:02.774-05:00Now I like this. Very tight use of the words. A ...Now I like this. Very tight use of the words. A talent I don't have. Very nice. I posted ne late.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/mist-of-mint-wordle-3.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-89535020461662702912011-05-11T13:15:45.920-05:002011-05-11T13:15:45.920-05:00Thanks to everyone else for the nice comments.Thanks to everyone else for the nice comments.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5885484059699784362011-05-11T01:11:53.438-05:002011-05-11T01:11:53.438-05:00Pamela, concise and lovely. I like "tiny mole...Pamela, concise and lovely. I like "tiny molecules not seen" and how it's about the evaporation of water before and/or about the seaweed below the surface after.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27635303585606172072011-05-10T16:46:28.753-05:002011-05-10T16:46:28.753-05:00Love the image you have created, one of my favorit...Love the image you have created, one of my favorites. And that last line is perfect. Thanks for visiting the collab,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://claudetteellinger.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-53874653706414511442011-05-10T06:56:24.703-05:002011-05-10T06:56:24.703-05:00Pamela, How weird, I thought I'd commented on ...Pamela, How weird, I thought I'd commented on this yesterday. Maybe I read it and thought I'd come back? I love this piece. It is more concise than you usually write, and you rise to that very well. I especially like the two final lines. Beautiful.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39583822373716316092011-05-10T04:44:09.614-05:002011-05-10T04:44:09.614-05:00The brevity took nothing away. It said what it had...The brevity took nothing away. It said what it had to say. Admirable.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82758234224548677622011-05-10T04:40:43.502-05:002011-05-10T04:40:43.502-05:00Lovely alliteration of "s" sounds create...Lovely alliteration of "s" sounds creates a softly musical atmosphere! And the last line is a drop of magic!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68822726786072941082011-05-10T03:37:27.729-05:002011-05-10T03:37:27.729-05:00A lovely poem. It was nice to see you write somet...A lovely poem. It was nice to see you write something short, showing your range.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-47179217916495081182011-05-09T21:11:24.342-05:002011-05-09T21:11:24.342-05:00Lovely, Pamela .. and I like the way you used &quo...Lovely, Pamela .. and I like the way you used "embroidered!"Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41147317800522358812011-05-09T11:57:00.048-05:002011-05-09T11:57:00.048-05:00That was fantastic! I love it!That was fantastic! I love it!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64577675157635739852011-05-09T10:55:59.664-05:002011-05-09T10:55:59.664-05:00I hadn't though about it, Viv. I took it out, ...I hadn't though about it, Viv. I took it out, works better now.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13297102711117899372011-05-09T10:55:06.374-05:002011-05-09T10:55:06.374-05:00It is Mary:)It is Mary:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25024286674845958092011-05-09T10:54:41.421-05:002011-05-09T10:54:41.421-05:00For lack of time, it ended up being quite short, P...For lack of time, it ended up being quite short, Paula.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69315469358251123982011-05-09T10:54:02.220-05:002011-05-09T10:54:02.220-05:00Janet thanks:-)Janet thanks:-)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-928794901600529662011-05-09T10:53:04.158-05:002011-05-09T10:53:04.158-05:00Thanks Mary:)Thanks Mary:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45313367905915155192011-05-09T08:04:48.918-05:002011-05-09T08:04:48.918-05:00Super, Pamela. You've created a lovely image....Super, Pamela. You've created a lovely image. Do you need the "on" after supersedes?vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61247279710298627642011-05-09T00:11:35.794-05:002011-05-09T00:11:35.794-05:00Beautiful picture! I love the river's mist in ...Beautiful picture! I love the river's mist in the morning, that's one of the best expressions of nature.Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11626927064971625332011-05-08T23:19:54.104-05:002011-05-08T23:19:54.104-05:00Wow. Compact!! Nicely done...doesn't seemed fo...Wow. Compact!! Nicely done...doesn't seemed forced whatsoever. Great work, Pamela!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16628224046503597842011-05-08T22:34:52.105-05:002011-05-08T22:34:52.105-05:00yes i just visited the join between the river and ...yes i just visited the join between the river and the sea here, the mist and the seaweed.lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5318187562309367452011-05-08T15:23:48.017-05:002011-05-08T15:23:48.017-05:00This is just lovely, Pamela. I especially like &q...This is just lovely, Pamela. I especially like "nature's embroidered landscape."Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com