"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Wednesday, December 29, 2010

"sexy stockings" we write poems #34 the last line is the first

She tells you she can fly …
The girl with the dragon tattoo.
Takes you to her room:
fishnet, lace, decorated with silky bows
magenta, black, red or the rare virginal white
in a pile on the floor.
Stilettos, sling-back pumps, knee-high boots,
costumes for every occasion.
Seduction, temptation is her plot …
Young girl that moves like a gazelle
gracefully through the crowd,
sizing up the innocent
with her lustrous eyes, lined in kohl.
What catches the crowd’s attention:
Stockings wrapped firmly about her thighs.
I watch as she picks her victim,
with her beautiful smile and those sexy
stockings … she’ll take you on a flight …


the first two lines are from "dragons fly"

31 comments:

  1. A sexy list poem! So many young beautiful girls around. Love the title.

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  2. Sultry descriptions that create a sense of knowing seduction. Nice work!

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  3. I wanted to tidy up the piles on the floor. I'll never shake off my housewifely instincts.

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  4. It is a shame that the allure of fishnet, bows, and stockings has been lost on a generation that cannot understand the attraction. Layers to tantalize desire. Sensual, descriptive and captivating. I enjoyed the moves, a lot!
    Regards,
    Don

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  5. I know her, not just from the book, but have watched her with envy at different times in my existence. The way she plants her feet, and dresses herself in a speaking manner. You have captured her well, and clearly.

    Elizabeth

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  6. Pamela, You've captured a person we all know and have seen out in the world. Elizabeth is right on. Beautiful piece, great imagery, ghosts of the woman linger...Well done!

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  7. I really love this piece! Thanks so much!

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  8. Thanks Irene, I hadn't even realized it was a list poem.
    Pamela

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  9. Adam thanks and it is nice to meet you.
    Pamela

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  10. Well someone has got to clean up the mess, Viv.
    Pamela

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  11. Yes, somethings are lost on the younger generation. Thank you Donald and a feliz ano nuevo to you.
    Pamela

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  12. Elizabeth, we have all seen her from time to time.
    Happy New Year.
    Pamela

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  13. Brenda thanks much and a happy New Year to you.
    Pamela

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  14. Annell, thanks for the kind words.
    Pamela

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  15. I'm a sucker for anything connected to dragons.
    (Especially those in sexy stockings!) ;)

    Nice One Shot, Pamela!

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  16. Thanks, Eric. Nice to see you and I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and I am wishing you a prosperous New Year.
    Pamela

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  17. This is truly captivating Pamela....hope you have a wonderful New Year! :-)

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  18. I wish the same for you Carrie.
    Pamela

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  19. nice...love the sensuality of this...there is something to the build up in the elements...though there is a sadness in her preying...

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  20. Yes Brian there is a sadness within someone who
    behaves like that. A part of them has a void.
    Thanks for the visit and the comment. Nice to see you.
    Pamela

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  21. ah..stockings...you have written beautifully.Happy New Year!

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  22. Very sensual with an aftertaste of sadness. Good work, Pam. Happy and creative 2011.

    My one shot: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/song-of-songs-one-shot-wednesday/

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  23. Thanks Uma and same to you.
    Pamela

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  24. Victoria I hope the same for you.
    Pamela

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  25. Loved it. I only wished I could close my eyes to read it. The beauty of the seductress and yet the sadness and emptiness.

    I have known her from both sides.

    Beautifully written, seductive and sensuous.

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  26. By the way, I really like the photo as well!

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  27. tolbert, thanks on both counts. I just visited your blog and I love your writing and the write up.
    Pamela

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  28. A very, very sensual poem. You probably read the Steig (sp) books. I know many people have liked them. I can't remember the last time I wore nylons, fishnet or otherwise. I only wear dresses in summer when I can go bare-legged. LOL. Pamela, thanks for your support in various places!! I hope you have a very happy new year.

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  29. Thanks Mary. I just got the trilogy for a Christmas present from my husband. I just started
    "the girl with the dragon tattoo". Mary I don't wear nylons or fishnet. Bare-legged is the only way to go :). I virtually live in summer year round lately. (for the past 9 years)
    I also hope you have a wonderful New Year.
    Filled with only the best.
    Pamela

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  30. Great Christmas Stockings Pam...love those fishnet...reminds me of how old I really am...but that is ok....Happy New Year to you also...so happy it is here...it is all to much by the time it is over..how I can breathe again, and thank God have time to write again....blessings...bkm

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  31. Yeah, Barb it is a reminder, that I never liked them to begin with. I will happy when the festivities are over. Though I love to see my friends, I love my quiet time also.
    Pamela

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