Restless hands, a desire to create
Never enough time …
Staying busy is important
Like water that rushes down
a mountain and becomes frozen in midstream
Fingers move in synchronized efforts,
forming – reaching – trying to make sense
Light through a window catches shadows
that spark interests and ideas
Creation, imagination, allows breathing, slow and steady
Pyramids pile high, placing layer upon layer
As we construct what we believe,
An expression of ourselves
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Cool, I like the staccato like rhythm to this, real cool :)
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fabulous,
ReplyDeletelove your take, dear poetess..
A++
I like the busy feel, the ebb and flow, calm from confusion
ReplyDeleteI like this, Pamela. We DO construct / form our poetry as an expression of our beliefs!
ReplyDeleteI especially love this line: As we construct what we believe,An expression of ourselves
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff!
My entry is at:
http://scribbleandedit.blogspot.com/2010/12/going-loco.html
Thanks for the nice comments.
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I would also like to use this piece in my book project. I love it. I know you sent me your email, but I can't find it. I would also like you to write a short paragraph about yourself. Thanks
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