"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

virtuosity of mine POW #13 music

don’t surpass me
in this life
as you weave
your fingers through
me softly and take away
sorrow
breeze me
feel me
sing me
dance me
one last time
give me something to embrace
light the candles to show
a promise to cross

16 comments:

  1. This is lovely. I can see how you were inspired by the music.

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  2. Good stuff - deserves an encore.

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  3. I enjoyed this too.I agree it does give one something to embrace.

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  4. I love what you did with this prompt.

    I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award.

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com/2010/07/28/id-like-to-thank-my-family/

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  5. You're right, Pamela, music is a pretty sensory experience!

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  6. Viv thanks for saying so!
    Pamela

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  7. Thanks Rall and thanks for the prompt!
    Pamela

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  8. This piece is lovely Pamela. You brought music to word. Well done. (failed? pah!)

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  9. Well thank you Brenda but I had some difficulty with this poem.
    I am not all that satisfied with it but I appreciate the nice compliment.
    Pamela

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  10. I like this, Pam. Especially the "me" section. whatever you intended with "breeze me", what comes to my mind is quite nice.

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  11. Thanks Barb and that was one of the parts I was quite unsure of. But thanks for the compliment.
    Pam

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  12. nice one Pam....and never worry about being satisfied with poetry....I hardly ever...maybe never ma satisfied with poetry or painting......anyway I always enjoy your words..

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  13. Thanks my friend Wayne
    and happy weekend to you
    cheers
    Pamela

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