pandemonium has broken out
the cable has been released
a squelch
twist of trouble
is now finagled
hard to understand
observe the tribute
while the sky turns a pumpkin hue
hoopla in a sedentary form awaits
while we mandate urban power
trust is a ward
read when necessary it means survival
insulation is a gem or worse
corrected and refreshed
proud
thanks for the nomination for thursday poets rally #25 perfect poet
I would like to nominate Joanny go checkout her poetry!http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/07/dance-of-fire-el-amor-brujo.html
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I just went where the poem went and found the journey exhilarating.Loved "read when necessary it means survival"
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda for a nice comment!
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the sky turns pumpkin hue,
ReplyDeletelove that line,
very masterful poem!
My first time here and I absolutely love your work!! Thanks so much for sharing ~ Amanda x
ReplyDelete:D Amazing it refreshed my mind! :P Thank for sharing ^^
ReplyDeletesky turns a pumpkin hue...nice:)
ReplyDeleteLove the way the poem flows, you just have to keep going! Like the use of 'finagled'.
ReplyDeletegreat poem pam..
ReplyDeleteyou transform simple idea into such powerful ones.
ReplyDelete"sky turns a pumpkin hue" i love it. nicely done.
Linda thanks for the nice comment!
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thanks Jingle
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Thanks Amanda!
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riikainfinityy thank you!
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hoiden it does in fact thanks!
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jessica thanks for that!
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fiveloaf thanks for commenting!
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Mory I appreciate that!
ReplyDeletePamela
oh my!!! :( this is advanced poetry to me :(
ReplyDeletebut still they way it's written.. i liked it... i'm learning stiff too :)
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How nice Harshika thanks!
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I love how the poem is about pandemonium breaking out, and then the poem itself is pandemonium. Very clever and very good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Joe!
ReplyDeletePamela
"while the sky turns a pumpkin hue" Love it!
ReplyDeletethanks evangeline!
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ReplyDeleteFast paced, great read, witty, creative imaginative, and splendid choice of words. You know your English language well. You know how to weave words together in a meaningful and artful way.
ReplyDeleteJoanny
from thursdays rally
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
did two posts today this one is for jingles rally
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/07/dance-of-fire-el-amor-brujo.html
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ReplyDelete"Hoopla in a sedentary form awaits" was my favorite line. There is such a strong contradiction here that makes that line for me irresistible. It's almost like the arrival of 2012. A piece surely to fit in with all the History Channel's doomsday features they've been running lately. I love messy pieces like this! Thought provoking paired with various interpretations...Truly a great read!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, really loved the way it flows. Lovely imagery. Great work!
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ReplyDeleteu win perfect poet award on week 25,
Happy Friday!
Joanny thanks for that!
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splashofexpression
ReplyDeletethank you!
Pamela
deadpoet88 thanks for saying so!
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Jingle thanks and happy friday to you!
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thanks!
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ReplyDeleteI became a follower of yours today, your style, tone , and appropriate pairing of words, makes your poetry pleasurable to read.
Joanny
thanks Joanny and I really like your poetry as well!
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lovely poem pamela
ReplyDeletereedssss thanks so much!
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"Pumpkin hue" - loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks literary!
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