"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

on the outside thursday poets rally #25

pandemonium has broken out

the cable has been released

a squelch

twist of trouble

is now finagled

hard to understand

observe the tribute

while the sky turns a pumpkin hue

hoopla in a sedentary form awaits

while we mandate urban power

trust is a ward

read when necessary it means survival

insulation is a gem or worse

corrected and refreshed

proud


thanks for the nomination for thursday poets rally #25 perfect poet
I would like to nominate Joanny go checkout her poetry!http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/07/dance-of-fire-el-amor-brujo.html

40 comments:

  1. I just went where the poem went and found the journey exhilarating.Loved "read when necessary it means survival"

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  2. Thanks Linda for a nice comment!
    Pamela

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  3. the sky turns pumpkin hue,
    love that line,
    very masterful poem!

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  4. My first time here and I absolutely love your work!! Thanks so much for sharing ~ Amanda x

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  5. :D Amazing it refreshed my mind! :P Thank for sharing ^^

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  6. sky turns a pumpkin hue...nice:)

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  7. Love the way the poem flows, you just have to keep going! Like the use of 'finagled'.

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  8. you transform simple idea into such powerful ones.
    "sky turns a pumpkin hue" i love it. nicely done.

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  9. Linda thanks for the nice comment!
    Pamela

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  10. riikainfinityy thank you!
    Pamela

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  11. hoiden it does in fact thanks!
    Pamela

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  12. jessica thanks for that!
    Pamela

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  13. fiveloaf thanks for commenting!
    Pamela

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  14. oh my!!! :( this is advanced poetry to me :(

    but still they way it's written.. i liked it... i'm learning stiff too :)

    www.dancingfreak.wordpress.com

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  15. How nice Harshika thanks!
    Pamela

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  16. I love how the poem is about pandemonium breaking out, and then the poem itself is pandemonium. Very clever and very good.

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  17. "while the sky turns a pumpkin hue" Love it!

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  19. Fast paced, great read, witty, creative imaginative, and splendid choice of words. You know your English language well. You know how to weave words together in a meaningful and artful way.

    Joanny
    from thursdays rally
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

    did two posts today this one is for jingles rally
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/07/dance-of-fire-el-amor-brujo.html
    July 22, 2010 11:14 PM

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  21. "Hoopla in a sedentary form awaits" was my favorite line. There is such a strong contradiction here that makes that line for me irresistible. It's almost like the arrival of 2012. A piece surely to fit in with all the History Channel's doomsday features they've been running lately. I love messy pieces like this! Thought provoking paired with various interpretations...Truly a great read!!

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  22. Beautiful poem, really loved the way it flows. Lovely imagery. Great work!

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  23. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/23/the-perfect-poet-award-week-25/

    u win perfect poet award on week 25,
    Happy Friday!

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  24. splashofexpression
    thank you!
    Pamela

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  25. deadpoet88 thanks for saying so!
    Pamela

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  26. Jingle thanks and happy friday to you!
    Pamela

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  27. Pamela

    I became a follower of yours today, your style, tone , and appropriate pairing of words, makes your poetry pleasurable to read.

    Joanny

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  28. thanks Joanny and I really like your poetry as well!
    Pamela

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  29. reedssss thanks so much!
    Pamela

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