"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

virtuosity of mine POW #13 music

don’t surpass me
in this life
as you weave
your fingers through
me softly and take away
sorrow
breeze me
feel me
sing me
dance me
one last time
give me something to embrace
light the candles to show
a promise to cross
Posted by flaubert at 10:20 PM

16 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 2:16 AM

    This is lovely. I can see how you were inspired by the music.

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  2. Stan SkiJuly 28, 2010 at 2:47 AM

    Good stuff - deserves an encore.

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  3. rallentandaJuly 28, 2010 at 3:43 AM

    I enjoyed this too.I agree it does give one something to embrace.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 4:16 AM

    I love what you did with this prompt.

    I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award.

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com/2010/07/28/id-like-to-thank-my-family/

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  5. UnknownJuly 28, 2010 at 7:43 AM

    You're right, Pamela, music is a pretty sensory experience!

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  6. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    Viv thanks for saying so!
    Pamela

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  7. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    Thanks Stan!
    Pamela

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  8. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    Thanks Rall and thanks for the prompt!
    Pamela

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  9. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    Thank you tillybud!
    Pamela

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  10. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:09 AM

    yes it is Derrick!
    Pamela

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  11. brenda wJuly 28, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    This piece is lovely Pamela. You brought music to word. Well done. (failed? pah!)

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  12. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM

    Well thank you Brenda but I had some difficulty with this poem.
    I am not all that satisfied with it but I appreciate the nice compliment.
    Pamela

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  13. barbaraJuly 28, 2010 at 3:22 PM

    I like this, Pam. Especially the "me" section. whatever you intended with "breeze me", what comes to my mind is quite nice.

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  14. flaubertJuly 28, 2010 at 3:36 PM

    Thanks Barb and that was one of the parts I was quite unsure of. But thanks for the compliment.
    Pam

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  15. Wayne PitchkoJuly 30, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    nice one Pam....and never worry about being satisfied with poetry....I hardly ever...maybe never ma satisfied with poetry or painting......anyway I always enjoy your words..

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  16. flaubertJuly 30, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    Thanks my friend Wayne
    and happy weekend to you
    cheers
    Pamela

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