This is lovely. I can see how you were inspired by the music.
Good stuff - deserves an encore.
I enjoyed this too.I agree it does give one something to embrace.
I love what you did with this prompt.I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award. http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com/2010/07/28/id-like-to-thank-my-family/
You're right, Pamela, music is a pretty sensory experience!
Viv thanks for saying so!Pamela
Thanks Rall and thanks for the prompt!Pamela
Thank you tillybud!Pamela
yes it is Derrick!Pamela
This piece is lovely Pamela. You brought music to word. Well done. (failed? pah!)
Well thank you Brenda but I had some difficulty with this poem.I am not all that satisfied with it but I appreciate the nice compliment.Pamela
I like this, Pam. Especially the "me" section. whatever you intended with "breeze me", what comes to my mind is quite nice.
Thanks Barb and that was one of the parts I was quite unsure of. But thanks for the compliment. Pam
nice one Pam....and never worry about being satisfied with poetry....I hardly ever...maybe never ma satisfied with poetry or painting......anyway I always enjoy your words..
Thanks my friend Wayneand happy weekend to youcheersPamela