"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Thursday, July 29, 2010

lovers poets united #8 sultry

the smell of you upon my skin
pheromones
whirling through my senses
of infinity


round and round
scents of you, pleasurable
hold me fixed, caress my skin
infinity


you touch my hair
kiss my lips
gaze into my eyes
infinity exists


trace my finger on your skin
the shape of the neverending
with no beginning, no end
sign of infinity


what happens next?
wait for a sign
till the morning comes
infinity finally leaves me
Posted by flaubert at 11:57 AM

21 comments:

  1. Dina SpiceJuly 29, 2010 at 12:39 PM

    Ah, the luxuriousness of the interlude...seemingly perfect and endless, until it ends. Very sexy and sad.

    - Dina

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  2. Robert LloydJuly 29, 2010 at 2:48 PM

    Infinity is never forever....such an odd thought. I enjoyed reading your poem Pamela. I loved how senusal this particular line was
    "trace my finger on your skin
    the shape of the neverending
    with no beginning"
    It sparked some interesting images in my mind. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. MaryJuly 29, 2010 at 6:13 PM

    Pamela, this is very sexy and sultry indeed. The fourth stanza is my favorite!

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  4. signed...bkmJuly 29, 2010 at 6:18 PM

    Amazing how scents pull you to someone---lovely and sexy...scents...yes, scents...bkm

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  5. flaubertJuly 29, 2010 at 7:47 PM

    thanks Dina and it is sad!
    Psmela

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  6. flaubertJuly 29, 2010 at 7:50 PM

    infinity is forever Robert thanks!
    Pamela

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  7. flaubertJuly 29, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    thanks Mary!
    Pamela

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  8. flaubertJuly 29, 2010 at 7:53 PM

    thanks bkm!
    Pamela

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  9. DasuntouchaJuly 29, 2010 at 8:33 PM

    ...round and round
    scents of you, pleasurable
    hold me fixed, caress my skin
    infinity    ...

    ...the scent of someone you desire can have a delightfully dizzling effect for sure...dig these lines and this piece. (^_^)

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 29, 2010 at 8:40 PM

    apt usage of sense and smooth flow,
    beautiful job!

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  11. Carrie Van HornJuly 29, 2010 at 8:44 PM

    flaubert I love your poem for the prompt...the description and imagery is so vivid and beautiful. :-)

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  12. Diane TJuly 30, 2010 at 6:48 AM

    A beautifully sensual poem, Pamela!

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  13. flaubertJuly 30, 2010 at 10:46 AM

    Dasuntoucha thanks for visiting and commenting!
    Pamela

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  14. flaubertJuly 30, 2010 at 10:47 AM

    Jingle thanks!:)
    Pamela

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  15. flaubertJuly 30, 2010 at 10:47 AM

    Carrie thank you so much!
    Pamela

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  16. flaubertJuly 30, 2010 at 10:48 AM

    Thanks Diane and yours was quite sexy!
    Pamela

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  17. AnonymousJuly 30, 2010 at 9:07 PM

    beautiful written and sizzling feeling=P, thank for sharing

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  18. brenda wJuly 30, 2010 at 10:38 PM

    Beautiful sensual piece, Pamela. I love it. The piece swirls around...pulling me with it.
    ~Brenda

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  19. Serving Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a TeacupAugust 1, 2010 at 5:22 PM

    very nice Pam!

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  20. flaubertAugust 1, 2010 at 6:35 PM

    thanks tea cup!
    Pamela

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  21. flaubertAugust 3, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    Thanks Brenda and riik!
    Pamela

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