"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Tuesday, July 13, 2010

'once' carry on tuesday #61 I had a perfect dream

I had a perfect dream

           I dreamt I was on the sea
   
I had a perfect vision

           I saw light in the dust

I had a perfect thought

           I can’t remember now

I had a perfect dream

           I dreamt of peace

I had a perfect feeling

           It once held me tightly

But nothing is perfect

14 comments:

  1. I like the chord the end strikes in this poem. Its as if you are floating on a cloud only to wake up. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. Robert you are very kind thanks!
    I think I finally woke up!
    Pamela

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  3. We know it's impossible but we keep dreaming perfection. Well done.

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  4. Thanks Nara we do, don't we!
    Pamela

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  5. So true, Pamela...there really is nohing perfect!

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  6. Hi Mary and thanks for stopping by and commenting. I thought you were on vacation so you must be back!
    Pamela

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  7. Perfection only exists in our minds, not in reality! Love this one, Pamela!

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  8. Hellooooo Pamela! I'm glad I'm back, otherwise I would have missed this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. I had a perfect thought, too, once and I wish I had a perfect dream. Jealous. <3

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  9. Marianne
    So true! Thanks!
    Pamela

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  10. Linda so nice to see you!
    I hope to see you over at POW!
    A little French oh la la! (the extent of my French).
    Pamela

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  11. very lyric poem. the world " carry" reminds me of W.H Auden's I can your heart.

    keep on writing!

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  12. Thanks Mory
    Nice to see you over at Poets United!
    Pamela

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