"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Monday, July 26, 2010

love carry on tuesday # 63

Life without love is like a tree without
blossoms or fruit
it doesn’t scintillate
no triumphant promise
nothing is superb
it’s a struggle
frenetic feelings
straps it down to precipitate
like walking on stilts
high above the prehistoric carbon waste
that doesn’t circulate within
the unbeliever’s soul

8 comments:

  1. Love the tantalising sound of "scintillate"! An enigmatic, beautiful poem!

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  2. Liked the word 'scintillate' and the lines 'like walking on stilts high above the prehistoric carbon waste'

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  3. Love the part about walking on stilts. Great job.

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  4. A lovely poem, and a great use of the prompt. Thanks for your support of Carry On Tuesday, it's really appreciated.

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  5. Keith not a problem and thanks!
    Pamela

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