"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Sunday, August 22, 2010

'No one' monday poetry train #94

No one cares if you can play the piano

strike every key precisely and resonate

you became obstinate and fabulous in your bubble

No one cares if you are a carnivore with hunger to be prominent

you choose hatred and ornery vice as a friend

desperate and an unlikely foe

No one cares if fabulous gnats hang about

urging you to goose and bungle people

unlikely someday you will find a friend

but No one cares

14 comments:

  1. Great post - Reminds me of the time I literally bumped into a 'celebrity', who asked 'Do you know who I am?'

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  2. Thanks Stan some people can be so full of themselves!
    Pamela

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  3. Great post! It's a daily occurrence to bump into people who are full of themselves. Excellently written!

    -Weasel =)

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  4. Oh, so true Weasel and thanks!
    Pamela

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  5. I agree with all of the above comments. Great poem and very well written. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Your poem really touches...nice work!!!

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  7. Some interesting/unexpected language. dig this:

    "No one cares if fabulous gnats hang about / urging you to goose and bungle people"

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  8. Aniket
    Thanks for commenting and visiting!
    Pamela

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  9. theaccidentalnovelist
    Thanks for the nice comment!
    Pamela

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  10. Hello, How are you?
    You are invited to attend Thursday Poets Rally, despite that fact that you are also represented as one of the fresh poets,
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-august-26-sept-1-2010/


    Thanks for the attention!
    Happy Wednesday!
    ;)

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  11. Thanks Jingle and same to you!
    Pamela

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