"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Saturday, August 7, 2010

I am spellbound writer's island #15 spellbound

as I penultimate to the next phase
I am voracious
as you give me cryptic signs
we ornate and become statuesque
as we bloom
static with fibers
I am spellbound in my stupor
as swordfish sail from the ocean floor

26 comments:

  1. Excellent post, filled with lots of imagery. Great response to the prompt!

    -Weasel

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  2. a spellbinding use of words!

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  3. "Penultimate" is sending me to the dictionary.

    I love 'spellbound in my stupor.'

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  4. I like "as we bloom/static with fibers". I like your take on the prompt. Lots of good sense imagery.

    Elizabeth

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  5. Great visual description of the feeling.

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  6. Captivated by your words :)

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  7. You are causing me to penultimate as I bloom!

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  8. nicely created Pam....like the imagery....thanks again for you poetry....for reading mine ands the BD wishes

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  9. Such creative use of words. Very mysterious really and allows for a number of applications and interpretations. I like it more and more as I read it over!

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  10. You've captured the scene. Very visual.

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  11. Thanks Weasel
    I enjoyed yours as well!
    Pamela

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  12. Thank you Viv yours was one of the first ones I read this morning and it was quite a delight!
    Pamela

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  13. Thanks Mary and sometimes I am!
    Pamela

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  14. Thanks Elizabeth and I enjoyed reading yours this morning!
    Pamela

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  15. Thanks Stan and I loved your cultural poem!
    Pamela

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  16. I am not sure I want to do that Diane ;)
    Pamela

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  17. Thanks Wayne and I love reading your words!
    Pamela

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  18. Thank you very much Peggy!
    Pamela

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  19. The last image of the swordfish in ocean floor has the right touch of irreverence.

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  20. Great poem and I am spelbound by your words. Being dutch I did have to look up some of them.
    have a great day!

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  21. Spectacular read, Pamela. This poem is filled with bright, bold images. Well done!

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  22. Thanks Marianne nice to see you!
    Pamela

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