"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Thursday, July 29, 2010

lovers poets united #8 sultry

the smell of you upon my skin
pheromones
whirling through my senses
of infinity


round and round
scents of you, pleasurable
hold me fixed, caress my skin
infinity


you touch my hair
kiss my lips
gaze into my eyes
infinity exists


trace my finger on your skin
the shape of the neverending
with no beginning, no end
sign of infinity


what happens next?
wait for a sign
till the morning comes
infinity finally leaves me

21 comments:

  1. Ah, the luxuriousness of the interlude...seemingly perfect and endless, until it ends. Very sexy and sad.

    - Dina

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  2. Infinity is never forever....such an odd thought. I enjoyed reading your poem Pamela. I loved how senusal this particular line was
    "trace my finger on your skin
    the shape of the neverending
    with no beginning"
    It sparked some interesting images in my mind. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. Pamela, this is very sexy and sultry indeed. The fourth stanza is my favorite!

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  4. Amazing how scents pull you to someone---lovely and sexy...scents...yes, scents...bkm

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  5. thanks Dina and it is sad!
    Psmela

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  6. infinity is forever Robert thanks!
    Pamela

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  7. ...round and round
    scents of you, pleasurable
    hold me fixed, caress my skin
    infinity
    ...

    ...the scent of someone you desire can have a delightfully dizzling effect for sure...dig these lines and this piece. (^_^)

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  8. apt usage of sense and smooth flow,
    beautiful job!

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  9. flaubert I love your poem for the prompt...the description and imagery is so vivid and beautiful. :-)

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  10. A beautifully sensual poem, Pamela!

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  11. Dasuntoucha thanks for visiting and commenting!
    Pamela

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  12. Carrie thank you so much!
    Pamela

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  13. Thanks Diane and yours was quite sexy!
    Pamela

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  14. beautiful written and sizzling feeling=P, thank for sharing

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  15. Beautiful sensual piece, Pamela. I love it. The piece swirls around...pulling me with it.
    ~Brenda

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