"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Sunday, April 4, 2010

inside me napowriomo #4

if you turned me inside out what would you find?

well you would see the pain I have endured

living here and knowing a few fucked up people

again you would see the love I’ve known

tears cried, smiles and laughter shared

if you were to turn me inside out

you would see I am made of flesh and bone

and nothing more

let’s take a walk in the park together

because the weather is just delightful

15 comments:

  1. another nicer poem Pam...deep to the core....inside ansd outside....thanks for your words

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  2. Hi Pamela,
    Imagine my surprse at being visited by Flaubert...
    I checked out 1, 2 & 3 as well - all enjoyable reads. I like your taste in music.

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  3. Hi, Pamela. Thanks for dropping by at www.gregoconnell.com. It's great to have discovered the RWP community. Cheers...Greg =)

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  4. Wayne,
    You are too kind. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Always such a pleasure.
    Cheers,
    Pamela

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  5. Stan,
    Were you really that surprised? You did see the pic of my pup? He is my buddy. Thank you for the nice compliment.
    Pamela

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  6. Greg,
    It is wonderful meeting people of like mind.
    Thanks for stopping by.
    Cheers,
    Pamela

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  7. Stan,
    The reason for naming him Flaubert was because he looks a writer doesn't he? lol
    Pamela

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  8. Lucychili,
    He is the coolest dog I have ever owned. Just a delight!
    Pamela

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  9. I like the very straight-forward interpretation of this prompt. Getting past all of the self-deceptions, we're just flesh an bone and touched by the simple things, like a stroll in the park.

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  10. Francis,
    Thanks for the nice comment. I feel exactly the same.
    Pamela

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  11. I like that. Your last lines turn the whole poem inside out too.

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  12. Inside
    a feisty
    terrier
    a little warrior
    that fronts up
    for battle
    in blue eyeshadow

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  13. Sheila,
    Thanks for the nice compliment.
    Pamela

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  14. Rall,
    Ok, maybe I don't quite understand what you are exactly saying here. Or maybe you know me way to well ;)
    Pamela

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