Pain comes in waves
That dance round poles
of opposite forces
It may rise and fall
swing on the sideways
tilt
Feel pain form inside
Released through pores sealed tight
crusted and deadened by respirations
stiff
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
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flaubert,
ReplyDeleteYour words project the ultimate pain........
A very good 'feel' to express this Thursday Prompt, associated with Pain.
Eileen
so true, succinct and soft.
ReplyDeleteVery nice; great response to the prompt.
ReplyDeletePamela, you have really captured the feeling of pain here.
ReplyDeleteOh that tilt kills ya! Why do they make shoes an average of 2.5 inches across when the average woman's foot is 4 inches wide. I think men are the source, lol, although they'd never wear shoes that narrow! The pain is projected in your voice, Pamela! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteI love the tilt, and pain that dance round poles of opposite forces. It winds its way through... Well done!
ReplyDelete~Brenda
Flaubert, love the imagery in this it really projects the painful feelings. Wonderful writing! :-)
ReplyDeleteEileen pain comes in so many different forms.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Pamela
Cynthia thanks!
ReplyDeletePamela
Paul
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Pamela
Mary always a pleasure to see you, thanks!
ReplyDeletePamela
Diane thanks and I cannot even imagine a man wearing the painful shoes we wear, they do not have the stamina ;)
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks my friend Brenda!
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks so much Carrie!
ReplyDeletePamela
Wonderful imagery in this piece! =)
ReplyDelete-Weasel
I can feel the pain within >.< So much images flowing into me at once :X
ReplyDeleteThanks Weasel
ReplyDeletePamela
Riika thanks!
ReplyDeletePamela