We had goldfish and they circled around and around
and when my father got home he threw them to the cat
Whereon the thought might think sometime it saw
The carcase of a beauty spent and done
To give life you must take life,
and as our grief falls flat and hollow
Swifter than the moon's sphere;
And I serve the Fairy Queen
then somebody behind you laughs.
it's a cork laugh filled with sand and
broken glass.
Yet this abundant issue seem'd to me
But hope of orphans, and unfather'd fruit;
I sit in the room
with them
and they taunt me
with their agony;
TELL me where is Fancy bred,
Or in the heart or in the head?
How begot, how nourished?
reply, reply.
Process notes:
William Shakespeare
A lover's complaint
A fairy song
Love
How like a winter hath my absence been
Charles Bukowski
2 flies
Another day
A smile to remember
As the sparrow
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Forgot to mention, I love the title!
ReplyDeleteUm, 7 comments, all from me? Yikes, I am sorry. Blogger was down here (there too?) and nothing worked properly. I've had a wonderful time reading Bukowski. And I do like the way you have blended the lines from Shakespeare with Bukowski's work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Marianne and there does seem to be a problem with your blogger oops!
ReplyDeletePamela
Shraddha
ReplyDeleteThis form is a cento and taken from lines of those poems
Thanks!
Pamela
Well done Pamela. I think poor Marianne is suffering from cento syndrome going round and round like the goldfish!
ReplyDeleteI can just about make out the Shakespeare by the form, but you stitched it together with Bukowski quite subtly.
ReplyDeleteI'll try to post this comment in one hit :)
It ought to be difficult to blend Will and Buk but although some lines do shine out, you and others have made it look easy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rall this was enjoyable!
ReplyDeleteAnd when I tried to delete some of Marianne's comments it ended up deleting all of them!So I just left them be.
Pamela
Stan thanks for stopping over!
ReplyDeletePamela
Derrick
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting! I enjoyed doing this prompt!
Pamela
LOL - had to laugh at Marianne's comments and the 'round and 'round gaff...should leave that up, Pamela! Love this...you did a great job blending Bukowski with Shakespeare!
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda I enjoyed this and I cannot remove them without removing all comments for some reason :)
ReplyDeletePamela
Another fabulous cento as I make my rounds. I particularly like the final stanza, but there are some great combinations throughout.
ReplyDeleteAhh francis you are too kind!
ReplyDeleteI loved yours it made me laugh
(about those flabby knees!)
Pamela