"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
— Eckhart Tolle

Wednesday, June 23, 2010

My life we write poems wordle #7







A drought has come

I won’t drown

I obsess

I am happy

nervous

mad

Sorrow circles in a bad carbon sea

Glacial winds blow in on your birthday
Posted by flaubert at 11:06 AM

18 comments:

  1. brenda wJune 23, 2010 at 2:45 PM

    Pamela, This is so simple, yet says so much. I love it! and brrrr......

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  2. Julie Jordan ScottJune 23, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    Wow. I can feel the glacial winds. So icy!

    Read my We Write Poems Work here.

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  3. AnonymousJune 23, 2010 at 6:18 PM

    Hi Pamela, I really like the tone of the narrator. I think the final couplet worked obliquely. Also made me think of the Gulf oil spill.-Irene

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  4. Stan SkiJune 23, 2010 at 7:33 PM

    It never seems to be a good time for a celebration.

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  5. flaubertJune 23, 2010 at 8:24 PM

    Brenda
    Thanks for the comment!
    Pamela

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  6. flaubertJune 23, 2010 at 8:25 PM

    Thanks Julie!
    Pamela

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  7. flaubertJune 23, 2010 at 8:25 PM

    Thanks Irene great prompt!
    Pamela

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  8. MaryJune 23, 2010 at 8:26 PM

    Pamela, you can crystallize so much in so few words. Glacial winds INDEED blow on birthdays!

    http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/drought-wordle.html

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  9. flaubertJune 23, 2010 at 8:26 PM

    Sometimes are good for it Stan!
    Pamela

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  10. flaubertJune 23, 2010 at 8:59 PM

    Thanks Mary!
    Pamela

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  11. Francis ScudellariJune 23, 2010 at 11:08 PM

    That's as economical a use of the wordle as I've seen. I love the mix of emotions.

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  12. flaubertJune 24, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    Thanks Francis I have been trying to write these wordles brief!
    Pamela

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  13. barbaraJune 24, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    brief. yes.

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  14. flaubertJune 24, 2010 at 10:27 AM

    Thanks Barb!
    Pamela

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  15. one more believerJune 25, 2010 at 5:11 PM

    hi pam, before i forget i love, love love the picture of flaubert, his expression is priceless... i like how you used the wordles..it is like a kite flying

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  16. flaubertJune 26, 2010 at 7:24 PM

    Thanks so much he is a wonderful dog!
    Thanks for the comment!
    Pamela

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  17. AnonymousJune 28, 2010 at 11:50 AM

    Agreed -- an economical use of the words, and your placement of them casts a tincture of blue over the whole poem. Nicely done.

    -Nicole

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  18. flaubertJune 30, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    Thanks Nicole
    Pamela

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