cappuccino
cool breeze
coming from the ocean
a voice that is undeniable
music in every syllable
Narcissus drawn from the center
Aphrodite and pulled in dissimilar directions
Pluto surrounds us
beams of light around your face
Thanatos death of a loved one
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Great explanation of what makes a moment unforgettable.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Stan now it is time for me to go check out everyone else's poems! I have had a fairly busy day here.
ReplyDeletePamela
A truly unforgettable moment, Pamela!
ReplyDeletethanks Marianne!
ReplyDeletePamela
A moment not to forget beautifully expressed sight
ReplyDeleteA moment perfectly described.
ReplyDeleteMarja
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting!
Pamela
Anthony
ReplyDeleteThanks for that!
Pamela
okay, you got me hankering for a cappuccino cool breeze! You took me somewhere. thanks.
ReplyDeleteOk Brenda I am glad I was able to transport you! De nada!
ReplyDeletePamela
I must be missing something. Very pleasant poem until the last line... Thanatos death of a loved one... Thanatos is death, right? It seems to me like pleasurable moments followed by a surprise moment. But that's not what I'm reading in the comments. In any case, a very touching poem.
ReplyDeleteDiane thanks for the comment and yes I just threw in the Greek gods as a touch!
ReplyDeleteAnd death just fit at the end!
Pamela
Ah -- I was with Diane until I read the comments. That was a slam-dunk!
ReplyDeletethanks for that Diane!
ReplyDeletePamela