"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Thursday, October 14, 2010

It was never about you #24 big tent poetry wordle

a glossy purple kiss
a head that looks like:
a gourd
you never had the hook,
to extract,
or pluck me
drooping eyes and muddy hair
I had to leave you on the staircase
do you feel bitter doll?

16 comments:

  1. "a head that looks like:
    a gourd"

    I am kind of imagining it. I liked how you used the words here..

    extraction

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  2. I like the image of 'drooping eyes and muddy hair.' What a sight, Pamela!

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  3. glossy purple kisses are de rigeur it seems! Poor chap doesn't seem to have a lot going for him!

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  4. All this lovely glossy purple kissing everywhere. Nice, Pamela.

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  5. Anyone with a head like a gourd has the right to some amount of bitterness. I like the sort of sassy tone you found for this one. Good use of the wordle words, Pamela,

    Elizabeth

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  6. I'm with Elizabeth...what a poor person with a head like a gourd! Nice wordle, Pamela.

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  7. Gautami, just imagine, not a pretty sight.
    Pamela

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  8. No, Derrick he sure hasn´t.
    Pamela

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  9. I suppose you are right Elizabeth.
    Thanks.
    Pamela

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  10. Yeah, Diane poor person, thanks.
    Pamela

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  11. A nifty piece with a good portion of admirable attitude! Love it...

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  12. Thanks Susan and sometimes you have to have an attitude.
    Pamela

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  13. I would leave this one on the "staircase" too. Excellent poem/wordle

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  14. Thanks Willow and thanks for visiting,
    Pamela

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