When the tale is told for everyone to hear:
A sliver of light enters the fissure in the wall.
It has the smoothness of a golden chain — twisted.
It winds itself round and encompasses softness.
As a sharp, jagged edge moves along the surface.
It rips open the contents of the sky, unraveling,
pouring diamonds and sapphires onto the blind.
Guiding them on the journey, so that they may not
fall … and drown
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Interesting and intriguing imagery you have here…takes my mind to a far away space...thank you. (^_^)
ReplyDeletelove the imagery.
ReplyDeletelove to see the silver light in...
beautiful piece.
Interesting piece!
ReplyDeleteInteresting, stunning imagery...
ReplyDeleteWell done.
This is brilliant. Words ripping a hole in the sky so the blind can see. absolutely great writing.
ReplyDeleteYou've captured the importance of the story here.
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
A captivating piece, Pamela. Love the imagery here.
ReplyDeleteI love all the beautiful image, the golden chain- twisted...you make a sliver of light come alive....very nice....bkm
ReplyDeletewelcome writing for poetry potluck any time,
ReplyDeletelooking forward to seeing your entry,
you are so dear,
What a joy light is to lighten, transform and beautify our lives. A precious gift well captured by your writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for the nice comments!
ReplyDeletePamela