Encapsulated by the light of the screen, which divides
and joins all living things on this earth.
Enlightened — we must take great care.
Entrusted with a sincere heart, that will carry us
through the narrow bridges.
Engulfed in hardened arteries of time and haste.
Embrace and relinquish all hatred — form the soul.
Engrave an everlasting light from within.
Exemplified — putrid, rusted veins open
to release the vileness.
Envision this as life ...
All that a critic, as critic, can give poets is the deadly encouragement that never ceases to remind them of how heavy their inheritance is. Harold Bloom
Vasequillo lake
about 15 minutes from our home
"You can never compete with anyone but yourself." Cassandra George Sturges MA, MA, Psy.D
Interesting. I can visualise this with all the non "E" lines indented a couple of spaces.
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Interesting post! =)
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Thank you Weasel!
ReplyDeleteThere's some great depth to this. Excellent.
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Pamela, thought provoking flow of ideas,
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I loved all the "E" lines, Pamela. And yes, "enlightened, we must take great care." So true.
ReplyDeleteI agree, there is a great profundity to this poem and an underground flow as well! Exceptionally good, Pamela
ReplyDeleteThanks Elizabeth and again congrats to you and your family!
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Thanks Mary and we should take care.
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Thanks Diane. Sometimes I can be that sort of person.
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Lennon envisions love and peace. The message hasn't died.
ReplyDeleteIrene yes he did!
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Pamela
A powerful post, well done!
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fabulous post.
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Thanks for the support.
Yes, this is an interesting one. I also like the Es.
ReplyDeleteThis is an exhilarating read. Love the interplay in two languages. Nice! Love and Light, Sender
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