"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Saturday, October 9, 2010

Can we possibly? writer`s island #24 envision



Encapsulated by the light of the screen, which divides
and joins all living things on this earth.
Enlightened — we must take great care.
Entrusted with a sincere heart, that will carry us
through the narrow bridges.
Engulfed in hardened arteries of time and haste.
Embrace and relinquish all hatred — form the soul.
Engrave an everlasting light from within.
Exemplified — putrid, rusted veins open
to release the vileness.
Envision this as life ...

20 comments:

  1. Interesting. I can visualise this with all the non "E" lines indented a couple of spaces.

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  2. There's some great depth to this. Excellent.

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  3. Pamela, thought provoking flow of ideas,

    Elizabeth

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  4. I loved all the "E" lines, Pamela. And yes, "enlightened, we must take great care." So true.

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  5. I agree, there is a great profundity to this poem and an underground flow as well! Exceptionally good, Pamela

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  6. Thanks Elizabeth and again congrats to you and your family!
    Pamela

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  7. Thanks Mary and we should take care.
    Pamela

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  8. Thanks Diane. Sometimes I can be that sort of person.
    Pamela

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  9. Lennon envisions love and peace. The message hasn't died.

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  10. Irene yes he did!
    Thanks for commenting!
    Pamela

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  11. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/

    claim the poetry awards on the bottom of the post if you wish.
    Thanks for the support.

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  12. Yes, this is an interesting one. I also like the Es.

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  13. This is an exhilarating read. Love the interplay in two languages. Nice! Love and Light, Sender

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