a head that looks like:
a gourd
you never had the hook,
to extract,
or pluck me
drooping eyes and muddy hair
I had to leave you on the staircase
do you feel bitter doll?
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Thursday, October 14, 2010
It was never about you #24 big tent poetry wordle
a head that looks like:
a gourd
you never had the hook,
to extract,
or pluck me
drooping eyes and muddy hair
I had to leave you on the staircase
do you feel bitter doll?
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"a head that looks like:
ReplyDeletea gourd"
I am kind of imagining it. I liked how you used the words here..
extraction
I like the image of 'drooping eyes and muddy hair.' What a sight, Pamela!
ReplyDeleteglossy purple kisses are de rigeur it seems! Poor chap doesn't seem to have a lot going for him!
ReplyDeleteAll this lovely glossy purple kissing everywhere. Nice, Pamela.
ReplyDeleteAnyone with a head like a gourd has the right to some amount of bitterness. I like the sort of sassy tone you found for this one. Good use of the wordle words, Pamela,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I'm with Elizabeth...what a poor person with a head like a gourd! Nice wordle, Pamela.
ReplyDeleteGautami, just imagine, not a pretty sight.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Mary.
ReplyDeletePamela
No, Derrick he sure hasn´t.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thank you Robin.
ReplyDeletePamela
I suppose you are right Elizabeth.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Pamela
Yeah, Diane poor person, thanks.
ReplyDeletePamela
A nifty piece with a good portion of admirable attitude! Love it...
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan and sometimes you have to have an attitude.
ReplyDeletePamela
I would leave this one on the "staircase" too. Excellent poem/wordle
ReplyDeleteThanks Willow and thanks for visiting,
ReplyDeletePamela