"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Monday, October 18, 2010

A deadly human monday potluck poetry #6 7 deadly sins

Having laid your wrath upon me, as the twisted words,
are released from the darkness in your heart.
Brusque attitudes enrapture vice.
Your pride got in the way and envy is surrounding me.
Gluttony at the feast was grotesque, like lust lying
with its loins spread open.
The greed of the minions spilled poverty on the crowd.
Like a futile sloth you crawl below the surface.

8 comments:

  1. all seven sins are all over the place,
    vivid and real.
    well done!

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  2. Oh...you really create a (disgusting) image of the dealer of the deadly sins...as it should be.."the lust lying with its loins spread wide open" ...great write on the subject...bkm

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  3. Wonderfully descriptive, eye-widening imagery to give the seven deadly sins their due. :)

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  4. you evoke real drama on your prose- very well written and i like it!

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  5. The scorn within your words is profound.
    I enjoyed reading this.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Peace to you,

    http://notjeffery1.wordpress.com/2010/10/19/acedia/
    http://notjeffery1.wordpress.com/2010/10/19/your-name-is-ira/
    http://notjeffery1.wordpress.com/2010/10/19/greed/
    (my posts for potluck)

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  6. All the sins so powerfully portrayed! So dramatic and so apt!

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  7. Thanks to everyone for visiting and for the nice comments.
    Pamela

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