some people have stars in their eyes
to the smartest of fools, love exists
round and round
if this was life
there's a shadow on the ceiling
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
Sunday, May 30, 2010
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Beautiful strong rhythm,Pamela. Your words echo in this piece. The round and round makes me go back to the top and start again, and again, and....
ReplyDeleteWell done!
I do think of love as cyclical.
ReplyDeleteBrenda you are so kind thanks!
ReplyDeletePamela
Floreta
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Pamela
Glow is from inside and doesn't result in any shadows anywhere... yes, external light on face.. then as it is said.. brighter the light.. darker the shadow.. and love makes one's inside glow.. well written as it spurs thinking..God bless!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ramesh!
ReplyDeletePamela
Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteThis is deceptively deep. Excellently done.
ReplyDeleteA profound message with so few words...this one really makes me think. Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteSusan
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
Pamela
Anthony
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Pamela
Sweetest in the Gale
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment
Pamela
Wow, your deceptively short poem is very deep.. and provides a lot of scope for contemplation. A very good read, thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dark Lord!
ReplyDeletePamela
But I love to see those stars in his eyes... :) And him to see the stars in mine eyes...coz it only means one thing...WE ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER... :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome I would say Pamela!!!
Amity
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Pamela
inner constellations, always shadows, beauty in all. wonderful piece!
ReplyDeletewow thanks gabrielle!
ReplyDeletePamela