glitch the pattern
doff and let’s get it on
sapient wisdom I capitulate to your fondle
it is futile
pick up the caparison off the floor
come on baby
let your love come out
the tincture is sultry in this room
neon signs light our way
proof as I crumple in a pattern underneath
traces of stars and purses hit the pavement
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Great wordle work, Pamela! "the tincture is salty in this room," speaks volumes. I read this about five times. You take me with you into the night. ~Brenda
ReplyDeleteNot a fan of MG, but Sexual Healing sounds like just what the doctor ordered.
ReplyDeletevery spicy, yum
ReplyDeleteUm, I'm too young to understand this one! :-)
ReplyDeleteBut you got 'em all in.
How did you get the wordle to copy? I tried and tried and nothing happened.
Don't know enough of Marvin's work to pick up the beat on this, Pamela but "doff and let’s get it on"!
ReplyDeleteBrenda,
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying so. I am glad you liked it.
Pamela
sometimes stan sometimes!
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Barb,
ReplyDeleteyes it could be and thanks.
Pamela
viv,
ReplyDeletethanks and all you do is right click on the image and save it.
Pamela
derrick,
ReplyDeletehe is not my favourite but he is good. thanks.
Pamela
I like how you worked the words into the meaning of Gaye's song, and my favourite line is "the tincture is sultry in this room". Indeed. Nicely done.
ReplyDelete-Nicole
Thanks and I was surprised that it did work.
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I love reading these wordle poems, as it's so intersting to see how everyone comes up with a unique take on the words. Love the Marvin Gaye laced throughout!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting it seemed to fit for me
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I loved this Pamela.Anyone who can get this type of response from Derrick has performed a miracle!
ReplyDeleteI suppose so, Rall. Thanks for the comment.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wove all the words—great fun.
ReplyDeleteOooh...I liked this: "doff and let's get it on"...that's a Marvin Gaye, for sure. =D
ReplyDeleteLinda
ReplyDeleteThanks for that.
Love wordles.
Pamela
Linda G.
ReplyDeleteThanks and that song is hot! I was listening to him while attempting this prompt. And this is the result.
Pamela
spicy:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ana ;)
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You wordled well!
ReplyDeleteAh, Pamela, you are a master (or should I say mistress?) of the wordie. I loved the way you used all of the words. Not easy to do.
ReplyDeleteI love how well you used all of the words, Pamela. Your poem is a perfect little gem! So cool how we all see the same prompt so very differently.
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying so Susan
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Mary
ReplyDeleteI dont know about me being the mistress of wordles but thanks.
Pamela
Marianne
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment and it is so true.
Pamela
i just said this to another circus-goer, but incredible to me that you got them into such a succinct piece!
ReplyDeletei love the ending: purses hit the pavement.
Thanks carolee and and now I must make go check out the others.
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Marvin & Wordles! Such a fun response to all those crazy words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deb! Oh how I enjoyed this.
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So beautifully and neatly done, Pamela. Love the way you have used the words, as Carolee says succinct with no word out of place.
ReplyDeleteUma
ReplyDeletethanks so much for the nice comment
i loved your poem too
Pamela
Only by conjuring Marvin could anyone make a wordle sexy :). Great job.
ReplyDeleteFrancis
ReplyDeleteThanks and it just seemed to fit perfectly
Pamela
always enjoy marvin gaye and rocks perfectly to his sound...life can be so darn wonderful....
ReplyDeleteIt certainly can! Thanks
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