cognitive within its complexity
journey awaits
statistics of perplexity
approach negates
positivistic, political idea, positivisme
hang off the moon meditate
stoic in views
constrained from love
legitimate fear of bad news
utilitarian pleasure of a shove
feelings, faces, au fait
swing from the sun soar
transformation of a social idea
tortured with silence
becomes something which to adhere
it should be for avauance
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
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Some nice sounds here PAMELA, but 'avauance' has got me!
ReplyDeleteDerrick,
ReplyDeleteThanks and it means "to profit or advance". I wanted a different word to rhyme with silence. I see you remember my name ;)
Pamela
aye, love the last stanza too... idea/tortured with silence" it's a great image.
ReplyDeleteYou did this prompt VERY well! Great sounds that give interesting thought...
ReplyDeleteAna,
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying so. And thanks for commenting.
Pamela
Cynthia,
ReplyDeleteThanks for that ... I enjoyed this prompt.
Pamela
There's a wonderful BIGNESS to this poem, Pamela. It's well-built, intense and substantial. Well done!
ReplyDeleteMarianne,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for saying that. I enjoyed this prompt.
Pamela
Sometimes those big words intimidate and can often lose their effect if overused.
ReplyDeleteHere they flow and make the piece what it is - a pleasure to read. And given the context of the prompt they fit perfectly.
hang off the moon meditate
ReplyDeleteOK
I like this one very much, esp avaunce
Thanks for stopping by Scrambled, Not Fried
Stan,
ReplyDeleteThanks for that. Some of these words were taken from the programs I listened to and I expanded on them with wikipedia and google.
Pamela
Ron,
ReplyDeleteDoesn't everybody hang off the moon and meditate? Thanks for saying so.
Pamela
My favorite line is "utilitarian pleasure of a shove"
ReplyDeleteFrancis,
ReplyDeleteDon't the Uli's do it so well?
Thanks.
Pamela
Thanks Susan I totally agree.
ReplyDeletePamela
Susan I accidently removed your comment. What I meant was hanging with the moon and thanks for the nice comment.
ReplyDeletePamela
loved the line "statistics of perplexity" best. Learned several new words too :)
ReplyDeleteDee thanks for the nice comment. I did also when writing this.
ReplyDeletePamela
My favorite lines of a very interesting poem:
ReplyDelete"
feelings, faces, au fait
swing from the sun soar
"
So many wonderful images!
Mary,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. What a very nice comment.
Pamela
Wonderful combinations of words .
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying so Linda.
ReplyDeletePamela
Adding the challenge of rhyme made this especially enjoyable to read. "utilitarian pleasure of a shove" was my very most favorite line, too.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the prompt.
Deb,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! And yes I did enjoy the prompt.
lots of wonderful alliteration in this!
ReplyDeleteCarolee,
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying so and I enjoyed this prompt.
Pamela