"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Sunday, May 30, 2010

star struck osi #118 has asked us to write about love and here is my response

some people have stars in their eyes

to the smartest of fools, love exists


round and round


if this was life

there's a shadow on the ceiling

18 comments:

  1. Beautiful strong rhythm,Pamela. Your words echo in this piece. The round and round makes me go back to the top and start again, and again, and....
    Well done!

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  2. I do think of love as cyclical.

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  3. Brenda you are so kind thanks!
    Pamela

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  4. Floreta
    Thanks so much for commenting
    Pamela

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  5. Glow is from inside and doesn't result in any shadows anywhere... yes, external light on face.. then as it is said.. brighter the light.. darker the shadow.. and love makes one's inside glow.. well written as it spurs thinking..God bless!

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  6. This is deceptively deep. Excellently done.

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  7. A profound message with so few words...this one really makes me think. Beautiful poem!

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  8. Anthony
    Thank you for commenting!
    Pamela

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  9. Sweetest in the Gale
    Thanks for the nice comment
    Pamela

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  10. Wow, your deceptively short poem is very deep.. and provides a lot of scope for contemplation. A very good read, thank you.

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  11. But I love to see those stars in his eyes... :) And him to see the stars in mine eyes...coz it only means one thing...WE ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER... :)

    Awesome I would say Pamela!!!

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  12. Amity
    Thanks for commenting!
    Pamela

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  13. inner constellations, always shadows, beauty in all. wonderful piece!

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