"Life is the dancer and you are the dance."
Eckhart Tolle

Monday, February 14, 2011

Tides of Tranquilty monday poetry potluck #22-love, bonds, relationships

Floating leaves
drifting on waves
sparkling tides move
bound by elements
laced together
Braided silhouettes … frozen

In evershifting harmonies

Waves washing away
rough outlines of weary
hearts focusing on
brilliant stars shining
in pinpoints of calmness
Captivating shapes … suspended

Bonds that unite   
a realm of one

19 comments:

  1. Wow! I love the 'braided silhouettes' - that was some inspired phrasing! A lovely bonding!

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  2. Thanks RJ, all this is done
    in the name of love:)
    It is a hard reach for me
    to write romantically.

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  3. oh wowwiiiess!! This was a definite delight to read and absorb, Pamela! This time, our poems seem to have taken a similar road.. and i love it! yaaayyy
    Enjoyed your wordplay here, girl...
    "laced together" brought some real lovely images to mind.. :)

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  4. For my taste, this is the way to write love poetry, Pamela. Your images/metaphors say so much in such an eloquent way. You are one of my favorites.

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  5. I'm with lightverse the braided silhouettes is brilliant. The whole thing works well though, and in its quiet way has a deep effect. Well done.

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  6. Beautiful .. the bonds that Unite.. a realm of one.. Great piece here.. thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  7. your words are dynamic and fun.
    lovely entry.
    Happy Belated V Day.

    A++

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  8. Leaves on the waves are a great muse for poetry.

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  9. Brilliant and stunning with a side of awe. Very well done!

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  10. Thanks Victoria, but not my
    usual style.

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  11. Enjoyed your post as well Shasi.

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  12. Thanks Jane and about those tattoos ...

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  13. Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!

    Awards 4 Poetry Potluck Week 22, Enjoy!

    Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
    See you next time!
    xoxox

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